Reviewed By: Anglacheil On: March 03, 2004 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm rather curious about this new fic you've got cooking up. But I am in a little bit of a bind. You see, I happen to love the pairing between Miyuki and Nakajima, and not only as love interests, but as police officers. So be kind and at least let them be together, it's too bad a waste to separate them. But I think that Ken needs some time to get his priorities and guts into order, so good idea in making him choose to leave the force. But DON'T cut him out permanently! It's going to be a mess when you try to make them click again. This at least will get Miyuki to get to confess already on how she feels for Nakajima...about time too! And since this is rated NC-17, then get them together in bed, and make it GOOD. Keep this up, but don't forget your other stories, I happen to like that fic A Fragile Love in Love Hina. And that new fic in Vandread as well is on my to read list. See you later! And keep on writing!
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