Reviewed By: Rem122 On: October 30, 2003 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it ^_^ Yuki is soo sweet ^_^ The ending after Akito became good was really, really sappy and I think it was probably because you were in such a hurry to finish the story. Anyway, my overall rating was 6, although I probably would have given it a higher rating if the ending was a little different. >.< I hate putting peoples work down and don't get me wrong because it was well written. But after the curse was broken, Akito being so overly happy, and gracious towards Tohru, also everyone forgiving him immediately (Like when Yuki hugged him! If i was Yuki than i wouldn't have hugged Akito after everything he has done to me and after he seriously beat up Tohru) took away from the effect. So, thanks for writing the fic. I enjoyed reading it. (Is such a romantic)
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