| "Angel in the Flames" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Asaka_Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 14:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Dess-babe, this was great. I enjoyed the ending so much girl, congrats. You obviously put alot of thought into this! I hope you write another story soon, no doubt it would be as good or better as this one.
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Title: ahhh!
Reviewed By: Leth-kun On: October 12, 2003 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I had forgotten about this fic!!! Is that it? please say there is more! I'ma ll caught up and want to know how it ends...a nasty premise for a fic, but you handled it with a certain amount of class, and the cutest damn interludes! more, ne?
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Reviewed By: ipatdeathonthehead On: September 30, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot was trite; the spelling was fine, but not impressive; the emotional reactions of the characters were completely unrealistic. It wasn't a bad fic, but neither was it exceedingly good. The author seems to underestimate the emotional impact these situations would cause. However, the fic does show promise and the author will improve with practice
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