| "Night Ride" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: night ride
Reviewed By: scorcha On: September 20, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is by far the best and most touching and arousing fanfic i have ever had the privlage to read. mars is my favorite comic and i ovn all 15 graphic novels and am getting the 16th in the next 2 weeks. please continue to write beautyful stories.
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Reviewed By: pirateneko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I really wish the manga was more like this.....
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Reviewed By: rei's girl On: July 21, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story, but I would suggest using more pronouns (i.e., "he" and "she"). It lessened the enjoyment factor having to constantly read their names because it kept interrupting the flow. Some verb tenses were wrong, and you could stand to use spell check (although it might not have caught everything). Overall, I liked it. The 16th manga should have been like your fanfic! Good work!
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Title: good work
Reviewed By: hglover2 On: June 05, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a sweet fanfic. i really enjoyed it. u should write more on your freetime. keep up the good work! bye
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic. Really good story line. Keep up the good work.
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