| "Pokemon Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Parik On: March 13, 2004 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the originality of the story. The only things that could make it better, was if Lan got a new pokemon, and if one of them got a ninja style pokemon, with new attacks (like Septile, or Scizor).
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Reviewed By: MM member On: January 24, 2004 11:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, Interesting story. I havn't finished reading it yet but I like it so far. I thought your spelling and grammar was nearly perfect and it is very original. I am not one to judge but I was mixed on your style of writing, no offence.
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