| "Be Careful What You Wish For" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Mmm
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written and a HOT sex scene. But I found there wasn't much of Shido and Cain's character's in there. It felt a bit like paper characters for a while. Maybe a bit of physical description would go over a bit better. But besides that, WONDERFUL sweetheart. Don't stop writing Nightwalker ficcies. *winks* ^^
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Title: happy
Reviewed By: Shido89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOO.... very very nice. You should do more you really should. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lemon-Lover-Neko_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is a great fanfic if i do say so myself. But is seems there are many fanfics like this one... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! They all must die cuz this one rocked!
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