| "I Feel Good!" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 21:14 CST
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This was very nice, I really liked it. I was hoping it would go further, but it still ended on a sweet note. No pun intended there.. hehehehe..
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 07:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Nice little lemon tease. I guess it's a cross between a lemon and a lime. What is that called? Citrus? If you want a answer to the question about posting the two lemons, go see my first review. =^.^=
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Reviewed By: animeandraia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! ^__^ That was soooo cute! I found it rather funny... especially the part where Shuchi finds the CD. XD I can just picture the pink haired baka... ^^;; Twas really cute how Yuki kept calling Shuichi a baka. ^__^ And your fic was rather good for a first fic. ^__^ better than mine... >.>;; Mary Sue's are bad... *le sigh* So, I think you should keep on writing. I wanna see what else you can come up with! ~Taryn~
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Reviewed By: gallatica^^ On: October 08, 2003 04:10 CDT
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YOU ROCK!!^_^ This was so cute!! Lovely!! Hehhehe..... And the 'I feel good' part...XD Love that song~ Heheeeeeeeeeeee.........Wuwu? That got me rolling on the floor!! XD Esp since it was coming from Yuki!\ ^_^ WRite more! You have loads of talent! *gives yuki-hugging-shuichi chocolates*
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Reviewed By: gallatica^^ On: October 08, 2003 04:08 CDT
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YOU ROCK!!
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Reviewed By: T On: October 04, 2003 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!! Ilook forward to reading other of your stories. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Curse you! How dare you write such a cute story and not have a lemon! I really got to pay more attetion to the rating...
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For being your first fic, you did an amazing job. The James Brown stuff was completely hilarious, and I loved how Yuki reacted to everything that Shuuichi did or said. There were only a few grammatical errors, but a good beta would fix that. Overall, I liked your style of writting, and would like to read more of your fics when they come out. Lemons and limes are also good, but only if you are old enough to write them. Good Job!
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