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| "You Own My Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Meet again? This is the first time we've met in reviews...
Reviewed By: Neko Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to say I'm still a fan of yours. I always like to hear people review my fics multiple times just to say that. And aside from a grammar problem here and there, I don't think you have anything to improve on. This is a great story and I hope you continue.
| Reviewed By: Last Knight Thomas ( not signed on) On: February 08, 2004 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Neko Kurama, we meet again at a good story. This is a good story, And I have read enough romances to know about good ones. I think this has an individual touch that can develop into a mind-blowing story. The rest of what I want to say is much the same as neko kurama and There is one thing i want to add. If you truly like to write, then this will be a grand story. Another thing I share with neko kurama- I'm going to sign on after this review and put it on my favorites. Godspeed. I always wanted to say that.
| Reviewed By: Neko Kurama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it, I just save 10s for the inhumanly good. Mainly the fact that it's not senseless sex and someone actually saying they didn't want to was a twist I hadn't expected, and one I rather liked. I'm not to good at writing reviews, and I couldn't find much of anything wrong, besides the point that it didn't give a background on the characters and just started the story. Which may have been what you wanted, and I'm not saying its that bad ether. Sorry for any bad spelling and I'm defenetly putting this one under favorites! I'm such a perv...
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