| "lure of Inocence" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Update
Reviewed By: ShadowRealm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. Its really good
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: March 25, 2005 21:35 CST
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Love the vampire fics! This one was so sweet at the end of chapter two! Really nice plot, I've read some better but this is up there with Chibi B channie's 'Tales of Crimson nights' which is a must read for everyone. If you're not comfortable reading the more graphic stuff look on Fanfiction.net it's finished there here it's only up to chapter fifteen, but still there's only one scene. Like I said great plot, now if we only knew how to spell. Tip: put it through spell checker on a computer or find a Beta reader, it makes your writing look neater and most people find it easier to read. I really like the rest of your stuff and I hope you update somethin soon or I'll go crazy. Thankies for sharing your writing talents with the world(my world anyways which consits of mm.org and ff.net). Thank You DK ;) P.S. Please update! If you have the time that is or if you're still alive.
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Reviewed By: Tayko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 10:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i like this fic. Please update ASAP!!! much love Tayko
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: April 24, 2004 18:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww poor Yugi. When will the others meet their Hikari's? And what language was Yami speaking in? Could you PLEASE make this a Marik/Ryou? If not, well that's okay.
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Reviewed By: Med On: April 20, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! u updated! ^.^ keep writing this good ficcy! Or will u leave me in the dark? *.*
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Reviewed By: Med On: April 09, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon it's such a good fic!
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Reviewed By: TechnicalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 03:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update update update and etc. please
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Reviewed By: Mandy D On: December 21, 2003 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great. continue
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Reviewed By: Scarred_For_Life On: December 18, 2003 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
How long till you put up the next part? Its real good :)
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Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wierd and yet good. Keep it up!
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Title: SayinAngelPrincess
Reviewed By: SayinAngelPrincess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good and can't wait to see what happens next. Please let me know when you have updated. Wish it was a little longer though. Oh well keep up the good work. :)
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