| "The Pain of Being Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2009 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was incredibly sweet! I especially liked when InuYasha was talking about mating and thought that he'd heard enough to want to try it. Very cute. Really captured young love and Kikyou finding peace was another nice touch. I loved this!
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 05:52 CST
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Hey, I know this is an old story and everything, but I still want to say that I really liked it. It's nice to see a new explaination for Inuyasha's behaviour at times. PS, where exactly could I find a copy of 'Present Time', and whose the author? You mentioned it in your author's notes, but I couldn't find it.
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Reviewed By: kawaii_chan On: July 14, 2004 22:28 CDT
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totally awsome i loved it plese update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
liked it.
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Reviewed By: Michelle (RED) : ) On: November 24, 2003 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK... i think the story was excellent and makes me want to read more and know more about this show I have never seen! It was really well written and I am not just saying this because I am your sister! ; ) I did give you an 8 on grammar because you made two mistakes that I used to see all the time in my writing classes and I could not overlook them! One--- your= possesion... if you are saying you are remember it is you're! common, easy mistake! Two--- you said you and I when it should have been you and me! again, something people do all the time.. but it really bothers me! sorry!!!! Overall, i think you are an excellent writer and always have! I honestly think you need to write more and try to get some published!!!! SERIOUSLY!!! Sorry for the two blanks reviews... I accidentally hit return! : )
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Reviewed By: Michelle (RED) : ) On: November 24, 2003 15:04 CST
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Reviewed By: Michelle (RED) : ) On: November 24, 2003 15:04 CST
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Reviewed By: chichibean [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 16:48 CDT
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hey! good job! i like it! um, yeah, i'm still tryin' to figure out this website since i'm used to fanfiction.net instead but oh well! c-ya! -chichibean
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Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 09:42 CDT
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That was good!!
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