Title: gud
Reviewed By: fluffieluv678 On: June 18, 2004 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story has the pointential to be something great, but try a lil harder to keep alucard IC. Integra is IC for the most part, o yes and Eric, nice OC charater but he is bordering on being a Gary Stu... might wanna watch out for that. but for the most part i like your story!
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