| "Be With You" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: DBDPsycho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2009 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style was a little unclear at moments. And that docked a lot of points. And your spelling was a tad... off. (I don't know if squoze is a word... for example...) But the creativity... I haven't come across a story like this. And it was pretty enjoyable (after understanding what scenes were what...) And the rating, I did base off the others. I averaged it out to 13.5 and I made it a 14 and then I did 1 plus 4 and then I upped it by one because I think it was better than half good. But yeah. I did enjoy the story and I think that is what counts most.
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Reviewed By: hieisonna2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic so far! Update soon! Oh and interesting pairing! ;)
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Reviewed By: bluephx On: November 03, 2003 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. There aren't enough kuwabara fics and if he could get some yaoi action on the side it's a plus. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ping On: October 15, 2003 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah!! I'd give you better than a 10, if I could! ^_^ That was so hot and romantic- the perfect blend!! I love this, this is fantastic! (And I love how wonderfully real the previews are! ^o^)
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Reviewed By: Ping [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! ^_^ That was so romantically awkward! ^_^ I love that, that was a perfect first time!
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Reviewed By: Ping On: October 10, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! That was pretty funny, at the end there! ^_^ It's so inspired, I really love how in character everyone is! Great as usual! ^_^V
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Reviewed By: kiriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 15:36 CDT
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Reviewed By: kiriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a good story pls continue!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! I can sign in again!! Ok, now that I have THAT out of my system ^_~ Good story so far Linkin. No clue how you're gonna get Kuwabara out of moving (you are gonna get him out of moving right? I mean .. the Tantei just wouldn't be the same .. who would Hiei pick on without Kuwa-chan?? Not to mention it would probably get Yusuke killed wondering where the oaf was and what he was up to!) Oh, and the flashbacks .. kawaii! Course, there's always some idjit that has to make life uncomfortable for others >_< I loved that part where Shizaru told Yusuke to say 'maybe'!! such a warped sense of humor eh?? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Pan Pingli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 17:16 CDT
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Heh, I got here just in time to read part 4! ^_^ This is so wonderful, I love the angst of the memories, and all the backplot. (Very imaginative, I like it a lot!) ^_^ This is a wonderful story!! ^___^ Loves!
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