| "Happily Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, don't touch it.
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Reviewed By: pink twilight On: October 12, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it . so much that u should continue on please !!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 11:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i loved it and thot it was great. its perfect as a one shot because of the way you ended it. i would suggest not making it a series unless u have some great ideas that can follow it.
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 22:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was really good. even if u don't write more of it we all can guess what happens.
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Reviewed By: anynomous On: October 06, 2003 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was good! you really did capture the right emotions there. I wondering if mayb you could change this one shot into a full fledge story. I know it will b interesting if u did.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*love your story plez finish
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 12:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was sad and beautiful all at the same time. I felt like my heart was breaking for them, but happy the they could find happiness with each other, if only for a moment. That was a really great story and you captured all the right emotions. I hope to see more work from you because that was truly wonderful.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: starr-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, I dont think i've read anything yet quite like this.
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