| "Happily Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cougiecat On: June 26, 2005 11:33 CDT
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Sweet story. Great Lemon. I don't think you could expand it properly though without turning it really long and angsty. The idea is a great story starter, but expanding it would ruin the bittersweetness of this one shot. (And of course we all know that they'll end up together...)
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Title: Angel of Fire
Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should definitely continue with it. You're really good and I think you did a great job with it.
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Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES please write more! I would like to see if she gets her happily ever after!!! please please more O_O
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Title: Please Continue
Reviewed By: ErehwonDreamer3013 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 06:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lady Cat, I had an idea after reading your story. You could leave the first chapter the way it is and then write another one for when Kagome and Inuyasha are old, grandparents maybe. Then you could, at some point, have Kagome say to Inuyasha, "And Inuyasha, the hanyou, and Kagome, the miko from the future, lived happily ever after." By the way, I love all your fanfictions! Please keep more coming (hehe)!
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Reviewed By: wifeicustom On: June 10, 2004 23:47 CDT
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I think that you should continue but that in the end Kagome still gets her "happily ever after" because after all the shit She's been through she deserves one.
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Reviewed By: krnjulia On: June 10, 2004 00:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
continue!! gotta love the angst!
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Title: Title
Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Continue And Make IT A HAPPY ENDING!
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 12:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
It could stand as a one shot but it would be really nice to see it continued.
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I gotta say it makes a great one shot I really don't think you could use it as a start for a story. So my opinion is leave it as is. Plus why mess with a good thing.
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Reviewed By: Miaku3499 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's a fanfic better then mine i'm even crying beacuse of the sappy ending Cat that was amazing plz write what happen's next i need to know and if not i'll be willing as long as u do the lemon heehee . * ish hyper on coca cola and lemon fanfic's even though she is 13 going to be 14 * i'm bad evil and awesome oh well just whanted to say that was great and when u read this email me at Skullknight349@hotmail.com thanks Miaku " Aroura" Skyler
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Reviewed By: SilverIce On: January 04, 2004 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a little difficult for me at the beginning since I have no background knowledge of the characters, but once I got into it then the feelings and the emotions took over. I could feel the sense of history between them. I was aching for them. I felt their need and their fear and their desire. Keep up the good work, you are very talented.
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Reviewed By: Tom Tom the Poet One On: January 04, 2004 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, i am a little short of background so the characters are a little flat. The interplay between them was wonderful, you could see the comfort level they had. Made me curious for the backstory. You use nub, nubbin too much. You have a good sense of the tactile, i could imagine what they felt.
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Reviewed By: Kayr On: December 30, 2003 04:05 CST
Comment/Review:
leave it. you'd ruin the happily ever after by adding on more after the happily ever after has already happened.
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Reviewed By: The lost On: October 26, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its great just how it is. Leave it as a one-shot. But, if you have good ideas to continue in this General direction, you can start a new fic, there are no laws against it. ;) Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 12:32 CDT
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i liked the story so i read it again.cat,when you read this e-mail me,please.
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