| "Happily Ever After" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I gotta say it makes a great one shot I really don't think you could use it as a start for a story. So my opinion is leave it as is. Plus why mess with a good thing.
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Reviewed By: Miaku3499 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2004 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's a fanfic better then mine i'm even crying beacuse of the sappy ending Cat that was amazing plz write what happen's next i need to know and if not i'll be willing as long as u do the lemon heehee . * ish hyper on coca cola and lemon fanfic's even though she is 13 going to be 14 * i'm bad evil and awesome oh well just whanted to say that was great and when u read this email me at Skullknight349@hotmail.com thanks Miaku " Aroura" Skyler
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Reviewed By: SilverIce On: January 04, 2004 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a little difficult for me at the beginning since I have no background knowledge of the characters, but once I got into it then the feelings and the emotions took over. I could feel the sense of history between them. I was aching for them. I felt their need and their fear and their desire. Keep up the good work, you are very talented.
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Reviewed By: Tom Tom the Poet One On: January 04, 2004 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, i am a little short of background so the characters are a little flat. The interplay between them was wonderful, you could see the comfort level they had. Made me curious for the backstory. You use nub, nubbin too much. You have a good sense of the tactile, i could imagine what they felt.
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Reviewed By: Kayr On: December 30, 2003 04:05 CST
Comment/Review:
leave it. you'd ruin the happily ever after by adding on more after the happily ever after has already happened.
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Reviewed By: The lost On: October 26, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its great just how it is. Leave it as a one-shot. But, if you have good ideas to continue in this General direction, you can start a new fic, there are no laws against it. ;) Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 12:32 CDT
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i liked the story so i read it again.cat,when you read this e-mail me,please.
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 16:23 CDT
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Dude, don't touch it.
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Reviewed By: pink twilight On: October 12, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it . so much that u should continue on please !!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 11:38 CDT
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well i loved it and thot it was great. its perfect as a one shot because of the way you ended it. i would suggest not making it a series unless u have some great ideas that can follow it.
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 22:04 CDT
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that was really good. even if u don't write more of it we all can guess what happens.
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Reviewed By: anynomous On: October 06, 2003 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was good! you really did capture the right emotions there. I wondering if mayb you could change this one shot into a full fledge story. I know it will b interesting if u did.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasdemonchild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff*love your story plez finish
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 12:15 CDT
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That was sad and beautiful all at the same time. I felt like my heart was breaking for them, but happy the they could find happiness with each other, if only for a moment. That was a really great story and you captured all the right emotions. I hope to see more work from you because that was truly wonderful.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: starr-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2003 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, I dont think i've read anything yet quite like this.
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