| "hollow" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: ze author On: August 03, 2004 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohshit I SPAMMED myself. XD
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Reviewed By: me--ze author On: August 03, 2004 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
hoboy I suck X3333
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Reviewed By: me--ze author On: August 03, 2004 03:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
hoboy I suck. X3333
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Reviewed By: ww000 On: July 13, 2004 17:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
please jenruki!!!!!!!!! i love that couple! ryoruki... i don't think that they'll fit much... too common... opposites attract!
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Reviewed By: me? On: April 24, 2004 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...it's okay. I like it ^__^. I hope you update soon!!!
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Title: awwh
Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryo is his usual asshole self .. Rikas ina fighting tournament ... Takato takes offence to eveything ... So taken from the series ... but few have done this before ... so it works quite well. as for the bag ... we as writers all do that ... we just dont admit it and make it as hidden as we can.
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