Reviewed By: ilpalazzo2 On: October 28, 2003 18:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: A very entertaining and unusual story. It's nice to see Dracula's POV and his affection for his son comes across nicely. You do have some formatting problems that make reading the story a bit difficult (all those crowded blocks of text are hard to read online), as well as some spelling, grammar, and tense errors that could be fixed fairly easily with the help of a good beta reader (or editor). On the whole, a good effort and a nice, introspective fic.
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