| "Black and white wedding bells." Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 02:34 CST
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Crappy chapter? What are you talking about. It was good. I can't wait for you to write more.
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Reviewed By: DemonicFate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's alive!!!???? NOO!!!! Poor duo! Poor heero!....oh crap just write more
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Reviewed By: StaplersBreak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhkaayyy. You're killin' me, Smalls. I'm not exactly the Supreme Grammar Queen of the Universe, but you have got to learn how to use verbs. When you put two things together with the conjuction 'and' you need to use the verb 'are' instead of 'is.' For instance, Duo and Heero are getting married. Not is. And not to dog on you or anything, but you desperately need a spell-checker. You cannot proceed to write quality fics that other quality authors can read without feeling like they got a sudden wedgie unless you can spell "heart." It's not "hart." It doesn't take much effort to go back and correct spelling and grammar mistakes if you really want to people to enjoy reading. Trust me, the extra work pays off. Other than that, I think that you have a lot of potential. Otherwise, I would not have wasted time on such a long winded review. Please dont take this as anything but constructive criticism. You may think that I'm being a bitch for writing this, but at least I'm a helpful one. *wink*
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 00:01 CST
Comment/Review:
OH! MY! GOD!!!! I can't believe you did that. It makes for a really good cliffhanger though. Write more, please.
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: February 12, 2004 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a lovely story, please update it soon!! I do desperately hope that there will be a nice happy ending (the prospect of a lemon is joyous!!!), and that D-chan will be okay. Update soon, onegai! By the way, I hope that you eventually found some nice soul to Beta for you...
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 00:17 CST
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Yay! Duo-kun's not dead! That is so great. Write more, onigai.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 22:57 CST
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OMG! Why? Why did you cut it off there? He shot Duo-kun! Write more, write more, onigai, onigai.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: January 18, 2004 14:43 CST
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Thank you so much for updating the story. I've been waiting for a long time for a new chapter. I can't wait fot the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 01:47 CST
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Ooh, ooh, more, more. It's getting interesting. Can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Shinigami Duo On: November 03, 2003 23:04 CST
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that was great! you must continue. i'm glad u didn't stop because the fic was dying. keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Shu-chan On: November 03, 2003 17:03 CST
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Don't apologise for the late update. Computer's should be doing them!! Good story, enjoyable. Just a few typos that could be looked over. I do enjoy where this is headed, I hope Heero wakes up and pull's a Matrix-type fighting thing!! *w00t!* ^^ Can't wait to see more!!
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 18:56 CDT
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Ooh! I know the chapters are short, but they're good! Can't wait for more! ^_^ Onegai!
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Title: Don't stop writing!!!
Reviewed By: *giggles in insane fits of laughter* On: October 21, 2003 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please don't stop the fic. Or. . . at least try to finish it! ppplleeaassseee?
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 01:36 CDT
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I would just like to tell you something. The comments about you spelling and grammer are not complaints, they're mearly comments stating a fact to maybe help you out in the future. Everyone was just trying to be helpful, I hope, just like I hope everyone that read my fics would do things like that to help me out as well. I do like your fic. It has a very good plot to it and I would love it if you kept posting chapters. ^_^
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Title: black and white wedding bells
Reviewed By: vash_lover525 On: October 15, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is great so far. you need to work on your spelling and grammer but that's about it
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