| "Black and white wedding bells." Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lark On: June 25, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This fic was...well it was ok. I enjoyed it for the most part but all of the spelling and grammar errors made it really hard for me to get into it. (It's hard to like a story when you can't understand some of the sentences.) If you ever need someone to edit your work I'm a really good proofreader. You can email me at jaffj83@yahoo.com if you want me to review your work. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: White Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hoo yeah! I'm already enjoying it on the first chapter! :D I hope Duo will be okay! I will read the rest so I know! ^_^
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally. But you still have grammer errors. Oh well. It was good.
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Reviewed By: Stokley On: June 17, 2004 21:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
REALLY GOOD! I LOVE IT! MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 03:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update ASAP. That's all I have to say. I want to see Duo and Heero get married already.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey I can't wait fofr more chapters to this story...I want to know if there going to live happily ever after.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I really like your story...please update soon other people may not like this story but I do I can't wait for more chapters from you.I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 15:48 CDT
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I like it so far. Gundam Wing yaoi has become another little thing of mine lately. I loved this; the suspension in thinking that both Heero and Duo were dead at different intervals was good. Hopefully we're gonna have a happy ending **is still suspicious** And, like I've said again, I would like you to send me ALL stuff that you want beta-read. I did volunteer for it after all. Don't feel like you're bothering me because you're not. I've always got the time for you.
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 08:45 CDT
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Hi there, I'm happy to beat-read for more then your DBZ fics you know. Just send me anything you've done and want checking over and I'll do it. I seriously don't mind so don't worry about bothering me. I'm the one who volunteered after all.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great and sweet story, please update soon. ^_^ *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 12:44 CDT
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Late update? I think it was really soon. It was only a few days after the last one that you did. Except for the grammer and spelling errors, it was really good. Can't wait till they get married.
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Title: Ending Needed!!!
Reviewed By: Kitty =3 On: April 08, 2004 13:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job, that's a MUCH better ending! ...now all we need is a long sappy ending ending and a "they all lived happily ever after" (except for Akai that is) ^_~ i'll be wiating. don't forget a wedding scene too =3
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Reviewed By: rikasakuraduo-heerosyliaspike [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't review on fanfiction.net anymore!!! But I can review here so update here for me^-^'''''
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Reviewed By: rikasakuraduo-heerosyliaspike [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't review anymore on fanfiction!!!! But I can review here and say that this story is just the greatest!!!!
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 03:05 CDT
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Hey, I knew you would bring Heero back. You brought Enjou back. Can't wait for more chapters.
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