| "Black and white wedding bells." Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 20:27 CDT
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hey I can't wait fofr more chapters to this story...I want to know if there going to live happily ever after.
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I really like your story...please update soon other people may not like this story but I do I can't wait for more chapters from you.I really love this story.
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 15:48 CDT
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I like it so far. Gundam Wing yaoi has become another little thing of mine lately. I loved this; the suspension in thinking that both Heero and Duo were dead at different intervals was good. Hopefully we're gonna have a happy ending **is still suspicious** And, like I've said again, I would like you to send me ALL stuff that you want beta-read. I did volunteer for it after all. Don't feel like you're bothering me because you're not. I've always got the time for you.
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Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 08:45 CDT
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Hi there, I'm happy to beat-read for more then your DBZ fics you know. Just send me anything you've done and want checking over and I'll do it. I seriously don't mind so don't worry about bothering me. I'm the one who volunteered after all.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great and sweet story, please update soon. ^_^ *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 12:44 CDT
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Late update? I think it was really soon. It was only a few days after the last one that you did. Except for the grammer and spelling errors, it was really good. Can't wait till they get married.
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Title: Ending Needed!!!
Reviewed By: Kitty =3 On: April 08, 2004 13:02 CDT
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good job, that's a MUCH better ending! ...now all we need is a long sappy ending ending and a "they all lived happily ever after" (except for Akai that is) ^_~ i'll be wiating. don't forget a wedding scene too =3
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Reviewed By: rikasakuraduo-heerosyliaspike [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 06:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't review on fanfiction.net anymore!!! But I can review here so update here for me^-^'''''
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Reviewed By: rikasakuraduo-heerosyliaspike [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't review anymore on fanfiction!!!! But I can review here and say that this story is just the greatest!!!!
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 03:05 CDT
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Hey, I knew you would bring Heero back. You brought Enjou back. Can't wait for more chapters.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 02:34 CST
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Crappy chapter? What are you talking about. It was good. I can't wait for you to write more.
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Reviewed By: DemonicFate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's alive!!!???? NOO!!!! Poor duo! Poor heero!....oh crap just write more
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Reviewed By: StaplersBreak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhkaayyy. You're killin' me, Smalls. I'm not exactly the Supreme Grammar Queen of the Universe, but you have got to learn how to use verbs. When you put two things together with the conjuction 'and' you need to use the verb 'are' instead of 'is.' For instance, Duo and Heero are getting married. Not is. And not to dog on you or anything, but you desperately need a spell-checker. You cannot proceed to write quality fics that other quality authors can read without feeling like they got a sudden wedgie unless you can spell "heart." It's not "hart." It doesn't take much effort to go back and correct spelling and grammar mistakes if you really want to people to enjoy reading. Trust me, the extra work pays off. Other than that, I think that you have a lot of potential. Otherwise, I would not have wasted time on such a long winded review. Please dont take this as anything but constructive criticism. You may think that I'm being a bitch for writing this, but at least I'm a helpful one. *wink*
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 00:01 CST
Comment/Review:
OH! MY! GOD!!!! I can't believe you did that. It makes for a really good cliffhanger though. Write more, please.
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Reviewed By: ~~*N*~~ On: February 12, 2004 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a lovely story, please update it soon!! I do desperately hope that there will be a nice happy ending (the prospect of a lemon is joyous!!!), and that D-chan will be okay. Update soon, onegai! By the way, I hope that you eventually found some nice soul to Beta for you...
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