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| "Fall Warrior Reborn" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Angel of forgotten souls [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 09:17 CST
Comment/Review:
very good. please continue
| Reviewed By: roguekitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hurry! Hurry! Hurry! You absolutely must continue this! It's marvelous!
| Reviewed By: shadow_shadowangel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 10:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I like where the story's going. It sounds really interesting to read.......unlike the other Kurama/Kagome pairings, but anyways, like Abunai Mori had mentioned, you have alot of grammer mistakes that need fixing. I hope you continue though. Ja ne! ^_^
| Title: Abunai Mori
Reviewed By: Abunai Mori [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has great potential, yet, it has severe grammar mistakes. And now for a short time only, you can get me, yes, me, to go over each post before you send them to the site! Sound interesting? I truly like the idea, and I love the Kagome/Kurama pairing that is sure to unfold. Really, I will help you out. Promise. I have no life, and it leaves a lot of free time. Please think about it. A biento, Abunai Mori
| Title: Someone Random
Reviewed By: Abunai Mori [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story has great potential, yet, it has severe grammar mistakes. And now for a short time only, you can get me, yes, me, to go over each post before you send them to the site! Sound interesting? I truly like the idea, and I love the Kagome/Kurama pairing that is sure to unfold. Really, I will help you out. Promise. I have no life, and it leaves a lot of free time. PLease think about it. A biento, Abunai Mori
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