| "Lost times: A story of love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Sick
Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very very very poor I hated it maybe its cause I know Vegeta isn't gay and he doesn't go that way or maybe its cause VEGETA IS A STRAIGHT GUY NOT A GAY PERSON SO YOU BETTER STOP IT I HATE YOU PEOPLE though I have nothing against gay people I just hate finding stories that give too much detail on it and the whole thing is sick no if you don't mind I will be in my bathroom getting sick from reading you fanfic*Runs to the bathroom and gets sick for who knows how long*
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Title: AHHHHHHH
Reviewed By: anime [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sick sick sick two guys liking eachother not to be mean to you bisexual guys but I think thats sick and I have nothing against it but damn Vegeta doesn't seem like that and neither does Piccolo now please don't mind me well I go and get sick*runs to a bathroom and gets sick*
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Title: eeeeeeeewwwwwwwww
Reviewed By: shojogal On: December 04, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hate the pairing but I didn't read it so I spared myself the displeasure of that pairing but keep up the writing just get a better "couple"
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 01:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! I'm glad Piccolo and Vegeta are going to try to make this relationship work! Awaiting the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great first chapter!! Please continue!!!
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