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Reviewed By: Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 20:23 CST
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Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... So good I can't figure out what to say. heheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh... But keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Hermione Potter On: December 02, 2004 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
the plot is ok...but not great....if you work at it this could be a good story.... :-)
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Title: Why
Reviewed By: kagomeserinity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn you why won't you write anymore ? Please write more or else .
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man you have to finish this story girl. You just can leave me hanging like that. Update and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: akaneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay but no affence to him SCREW U red this story was great okay. OKAY no one is perfect. SCREW HIM. YOUR STORY IS WONDERFUL! and it isn't bad to demand or ask for reviews i mean damn we put all our effort into writing these stories then some evil person comes and messes with your head. It is fucked up to have someone do that to you and ruin your spirits. So don't go and stop ur story is fine. I couldn't even tell grammer problems and if that makes me a bad person oh freakin well. OWI. PLEASE DO CONTINUE! It is your original work and artisits never have to explain why the do thing they just do them.Keep Going!
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Reviewed By: me_111 On: December 30, 2003 22:16 CST
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that was so random...i read the first two chapters and it sooo confusing...
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Reviewed By: cute_sweetheart11 On: December 30, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm reviewing because I want more and anybody who is smarter than a rock will to!!!!! I LOOOVE it because it is a cliffhanger, and I LOOOOOVE fanfics like that!!!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i hope you get ten reviews soon so you can update faster. i like your story and everything its just getting confusing and can you give us a hint in what the parings are in this story. i cant remember if you mentioned anything about it. anyways, update soon, k!! =^-^= W.T.P.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright, that's a little confusing. Check that- really confusing. I suggest you go over your story and fix some things. I think i saw some spelling mistakes, and fix the dividers- they don't have to be so big, nor does there have to be so many. Also, I think it's really pompous to demand reviews for a chapter. You should be writing because you like to, and because you appreciate the reviews that are given freely, by people who honestly want to say that they like your story. When you demand reviews from your readers and with hold a chapter from them, it's just selfish and stuck up. I know what i'm talking about too. I have some stories up, and I know that I appreciate the reviews I do get because I got them from people who care enough to write the review, or flame. It's like your selling your stories for reviews, and it takes any respect away from creative writing. Ok, that's my not so little shpeal. Also, you put it up as a one shot. Don't. a one shot has only one chapter. Also, you could combine your whole story to make one chapter. They're really short, and it doesn't seem like you put any effort into writing them. If you're going to demand reviews from readers, at least make the chapters satisfactory. This story is mediorce at best, and just plain awful on average. Please try harder, and if this is the best that you can do, then i suggest that you find another hobby.
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 23:31 CST
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what? no! you can't do that! how in the seven hells can you do that to us? It's not right! All I can say is that it would be in your best interest to update veeeerrrry soon
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Reviewed By: You-know-who On: November 27, 2003 04:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good! I like it! I can't wait till you update.....heh! :) You've done a great job, yet again! Best of luck with the rest of it! Ttyl! Ja!
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Reviewed By: Goku's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE this story so far. PLEASE update really soon!!! I can't wait!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lemony fresh On: November 20, 2003 16:09 CST
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wtf was that?!?! u just left her there!! ROFL!! i cracked uo honestly!! XD update it soon iight i gotta find out wut exactly Kagome has to do...to get "him". *cackles*
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Reviewed By: Kagney On: November 10, 2003 10:44 CST
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Who is this guy? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Angel452 On: November 10, 2003 09:55 CST
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Was that Inuyasha? What will happen next?
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