| "Don't Leave Me" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zalliayah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapters were really short, other than that it was awsomeful.
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Title: Don't Leave Me
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I loved it.Catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: sesshy_lil_slut [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 11:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really funny cause when you said you might write a sequil if you say it really fast it sonds like i might smite a squiril.
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Reviewed By: monkey face89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
that should have been rated pg-13 and it was too short of chapters.
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Title: Yo
Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Congrats on writing as well as you did for someone your age. I really dont see why it was NC-17... keep it up tho, i can definatly see potential
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Title: rude
Reviewed By: kitty kitsune On: April 07, 2004 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
not to be rude or anything but who in living hel is mija?
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 16:11 CST
Comment/Review:
coulda been longer! but good! though i have a question your bio says your 12 and you wrote a NC17 cuz that just stricks me as odd... well good story! though the last chapter could have been part of the one before
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Reviewed By: skittleschick On: January 02, 2004 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...that was cool....^-^
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has lots of potential. But it is the shortest, most nondescript fic I have ever read. I hope you will consider rewriting it and expanding it.
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Title: One things wrong
Reviewed By: Inuyasha! On: November 16, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
One things wrong, the chappys WAY to short. Make them longer, I h8 short chappys, but besides that great story. It took me about 5 minutes to finish reading the whole series....o well.... If they were about 3 times longer you would of gotten a ten. That like I said was the only thing wrong. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: October 16, 2003 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet. Depression gave way to tragedy, then turned into love. I loved the story. please update.
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Reviewed By: Inu-baby4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story just try to make it a little longer because it sound just too short. Make sure you put up the next capter soon. I'm dying to know what happends! HEE!HEE! you almost got caught by your brother writing a lemon! Same happened to me! BE CAREFUL!
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Reviewed By: TriAnime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
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Title: Where's the tissues?
Reviewed By: Jaxxia7(too lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave this fic an overall rating of 10 because I'm being a lazy pain in the rear and I don't feel like filling in all the ratings boxes. One thing though, you may want to start making your chapters a little longer, okay? This is a great start to your fic but longer chapters would be a wonderful addition. Just a bit of constructive criticism(sp). Well, update soon. Ja ne! Jaxxia7 aka Nefra
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwww thank ya for the email about the update..(hands ya more cookies) smile..and this was another great chap..luved it..soo Kagome killed herself cause she thought she would never have Inu's love??? snifffles...soo sad..till next one much huggles an smiles Mija..:-)
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