| "Don't Leave Me" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic has lots of potential. But it is the shortest, most nondescript fic I have ever read. I hope you will consider rewriting it and expanding it.
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Title: One things wrong
Reviewed By: Inuyasha! On: November 16, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
One things wrong, the chappys WAY to short. Make them longer, I h8 short chappys, but besides that great story. It took me about 5 minutes to finish reading the whole series....o well.... If they were about 3 times longer you would of gotten a ten. That like I said was the only thing wrong. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: October 16, 2003 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet. Depression gave way to tragedy, then turned into love. I loved the story. please update.
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Reviewed By: Inu-baby4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story just try to make it a little longer because it sound just too short. Make sure you put up the next capter soon. I'm dying to know what happends! HEE!HEE! you almost got caught by your brother writing a lemon! Same happened to me! BE CAREFUL!
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Reviewed By: TriAnime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
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Title: Where's the tissues?
Reviewed By: Jaxxia7(too lazy to log in) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave this fic an overall rating of 10 because I'm being a lazy pain in the rear and I don't feel like filling in all the ratings boxes. One thing though, you may want to start making your chapters a little longer, okay? This is a great start to your fic but longer chapters would be a wonderful addition. Just a bit of constructive criticism(sp). Well, update soon. Ja ne! Jaxxia7 aka Nefra
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwww thank ya for the email about the update..(hands ya more cookies) smile..and this was another great chap..luved it..soo Kagome killed herself cause she thought she would never have Inu's love??? snifffles...soo sad..till next one much huggles an smiles Mija..:-)
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Title: Dont Leave Me
Reviewed By: Anime Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it keep it up i know you have it in you! Your Friend, Anime Master
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!!! this is a great fic
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY this is good ..i wonder what awaits her...hum...update soon!!
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Reviewed By: whitmangurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLZ write more
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Title: SO GREAT
Reviewed By: ViVi66 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, i liked it from what you have put down so far, but you might wanna make it a bit longer and a nit more elaborated, but other then that, you are doing really good (not giveing you flames) and you made a cliffy :( you should update ;) that would make me very happy, good luck writing ;) thanks for lettingmeenjoy your story so far -vivi-
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooh please dont tell me this is the end...sniffles...ok ok I can deal wif it..as long as there is a sequel...please??..wont help ya wash the dishes but will share my cookies wif ya??? hehe again another great chap..wants more so please update or write a sequeal and lemme know when its up k?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow great first chap I soo cant wait to see where this is going..Is Kagome dying?? who killed her family?? must have answers, this story is good so far, great start please update soon k?? ty ty ty huggles an smiles Mija..:-)
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Reviewed By: Golden_Fire_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a great start for this fic. I am interested with who this guy is that killed Kagome's family (please ignore this question if it is Naraku)? What happened to have her go so close to death? IS she in the feudal era or in her own era? Sorry about the questions, but the beginning makes me want to read more and find out what happens/happened.
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