Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic one-shot! You're really good at them! I agree with Marron; Trunks does show resembelance to Vegeta in the way he acts. It's in fics like these where you can clearly see the impact Vegeta has made on his son's life, Mirai Trunks (who never knew his father) was much more shy and polite, whereas the Trunks in your fic is more arrogant, though still not as arrogant as my veggie-chan! Keep up with the good work, don't know why nobody's reviewed yet, oh well, I get to be the first reviewer!!
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