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| "Get Mine, Get Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another fantastic one-shot! How do you do it? I never considered V/18's before this, but now.. I think I'll check them out. Very well done, please continue with this. One thing, I'm not sure but I think the last sentence was cut short, I mean there's no full stop after it so I don't know if the rest has been cut off or if you just forgot the full stop ^_^ Neway, either way it would sound right so I'm not complaining. I hope you do continue with this, though, I feel the need to read more! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Videl loves goKU On: November 05, 2003 13:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Like lots....very well written!!! Please write more...must see what happens next!!!!!
| Reviewed By: oujivegeta On: October 18, 2003 07:15 CDT
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PLLLLZZZZZZZZZZ continue this fic, i must have very very graphic details of what goes on, if u dont want to write an entire epic at least give it 10 chapters with lots of graphic hard core hentai details and keep in character, btw ur doing a great job so far........
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