| "A Night To Remember" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
This fic could be really good if it was formated better. It's very hard to understand.
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Reviewed By: Atarah [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would really like this story if i could understand it more. As alot of the others said, it would be alot better if you had the correct spelling. I could maybe help you with that if you wanted, I'm really good at that stuff. This story would be so much better if you could understand what is talking, thoughts, actions etc. Other than that..T/GK rule!
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Reviewed By: Janet On: March 17, 2004 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Reviewed By: cimnie On: March 12, 2004 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like others said, I would enjoy this story if you actually had punctuation, used quotation marks for when people were speaking, ....that and spelled things right/used correct grammar. What is with the "IM" thing- it is "I'm" ....no offense, but I suggest you get someone (or more than one) to Beta read the chapters before you post them. The horrid grammar/spelling mistakes really kill the story. :(
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Reviewed By: kkkkkajshsiuyfd On: March 11, 2004 21:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice story, but try to separate the sentences with punctuation. And stop with the capital letters to every word. Aside these problems, it's still very nice and ill be waiting for more.
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Title: yuyu_fan
Reviewed By: yuyu_fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hecate18 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the fic is good, it has potential but the grammar lets it down i think, the fic needs to be revised, maybe you should consider getting it beta read because like i said before this fic really has potential. ^_^ sorry for being mean, please don't take offense (i like the storyline), i just wanted to help you out.
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Reviewed By: WickedWitch6000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a good fic,but you really need to make some changes with the grammer and the punctuation.
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Title: A Night To Remember
Reviewed By: WickedWitch6000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Goku and Trunks,their my second favorite yaoi pairing.Nice fic,update soon,wanna know if there's gonna be lemon in the next chapter.Finally.... someone's knocked some sense into Goku's thick head of his;he's divorced ChiChi.
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Reviewed By: anlarae On: January 21, 2004 10:01 CST
Comment/Review:
must...have...punctuation...
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Reviewed By: saiyanprincess88 On: November 05, 2003 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realli like your story.....you realli neeed to work on ur grammer!!! i coul;d bearly read it... no offense or anything i really like what ur doing with goku and trunks ive never seen it happen before so its realli interesting....but please have someone or yourself proof read before you move on to another chapter....if its proof read it makes a story more enjoyable.... please update soon and i hope that my comments help you in the future. Much love, Saiyanprincess88
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Reviewed By: CkY On: November 02, 2003 14:06 CST
Comment/Review:
most interesting, a little hard to due to lack of quotation marks and grammar but other then that it was pretty good keep it up, the first fics are always the hardest
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Reviewed By: babby On: October 25, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really Like This Story
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Reviewed By: cf On: October 07, 2003 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this would be a good enough fic if you should seriously redo and possibly have someone proofread it. Way too many mistakes like misspelling Trunks, no period at almost each sentence. This is only constructive criticism.
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