| "Sweet Release" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Impi On: February 16, 2004 19:26 CST
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There where a lot of typos this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mononoke who isn't logged in right now. On: February 16, 2004 08:41 CST
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Wow, I liked it, but the glaring spelling errors were kind of distracting. Well done, I love this story and can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 16, 2004 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... poor Ryou.... AGAIN! * hugs the dejected hikari * I still think Yugi's spoiled... he got Seto first!.... :) Really good chapter... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: M0N0N0KČ On: February 14, 2004 03:46 CST
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Wow, I never knew you had a strange affinity with Seto and Voyerism... It kinda freaks me out actually. But well written, and the only thing I didn't relly like was that lemon. It felt rushed and kinda hard to believe. But the rest of it more than makes up, so keep on posting! ~*~Mononoke~*~
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 17:56 CST
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Hey, would you look at that! Just add a few more people and it would be one big, giant, orge!!! YEEhheEE!!! Sorry, I had to get thought whole "YEEhheEE" thing out of my system. *clears throat* Anyways, the plot in this one is rreeeallly interesting. GOD, DAMN, DAMN YOU AND YOU.... *thinks of soemthign bad* YOUR... STORIES!!! Yeah, ya didn't see THAT one comin' did ya?
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 11, 2004 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! Yugi's gonna' get it.... I hope it's not THAT it..... ewww...... something like.... being beaten into a bloody mass would be nice...:)
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Reviewed By: Impi On: February 06, 2004 09:32 CST
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This sounds bad....
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 06, 2004 08:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooo! Run away! He'll beat you! DUdue...that was cool. Imagine dying over and over and over again....it just keeps going anf going liket he energizer bunny! yay! *bites nails* eeep!!!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 06, 2004 08:06 CST
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Great chapter! Poor Ryou* hugs the cute hikari* Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Impi On: February 05, 2004 14:48 CST
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Damn. Back where they started. Not either death can save them.
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Title: Wow !
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was good, but this made it even better, though I feel sorry for Ryou and Malik, after all they went through. (Oh and Yugi too, but he was better off with Yami). Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 05, 2004 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww...so worng! i acatuly had a tear come to my eye about Tristiahn..i wonder if Ryou will get to see the light of day again to say anything...*body slams yamis* WHY WOTN YOU DIE!!!!!!! yup
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 05, 2004 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...... great.... you kill them of... then you bring them back to life, even though they would have been better off DEAD! ........Well... Yugi's just a brat... and he should be happy... bat Malik and Ryou!.......... You... you evil, evil Bakurasgirl! * looks annoyed, then suddenly hugs you tightly* Thank you Thank you Thank you!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl too lazy to log in On: February 05, 2004 06:17 CST
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I love all my reviewers. And Malik Lover and Anzu Basher is cool! She/He/They have become a loyal reviewer. And I update when I can, i love the prodding to update! I know that way people love the story.
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (again.) On: February 05, 2004 06:10 CST
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I just read some of the other reviews *looks to Malik lover* and I just wanted to say I'm proud of you. Not the reviewer, they suck. THey say stupid things and yell at you to get your ass moving and post. That isn't cool. I just wanted to say congrats for a wonderful story and I'm proud that you don't let some reviewers get to you. (At least not out loud;))
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