| "The Sway of Smoke" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Child of Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2004 00:47 CDT
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YAY that was fun! Soujirou was acting like such a virgin for someone who... isn't^.^;; The battle between Souji and Ken will be interesting when it happens... I suppose you'll be summerizing that part?
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Kitiara_ On: January 04, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just loved it. Poor Soujiro... just think in that Usui psicko... igh... >.<
Sou and Aoshi, make and cute couple. Keep updating! ;-)
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Title: I love this
Reviewed By: Linkin Fantasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 06:44 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story it took a turn that I almost didn't think it was going to, with the rapings and all but it fits in nicely. I really like how everyone stayed in character most people take them and f*** them up so I'm glad you didn't. Hmm, there really is no complaint, but at the end everything was more underlined then dialog. Keep up the good work I hope you can update pretty soon.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic. The pairing between Aoshi and Soujirou is unexpected but nevertheless cute and interesting. I can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon!
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Title: I love this
Reviewed By: L.Fantasy On: December 11, 2003 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story it took a turn that I almost didn't think it was going to, with the rapings and all but it fits in nicely. I really like how everyone stayed in character most people take them and f*** them up so I'm glad you didn't. Hmm, there really is no complaint, but at the end everything was more underlined then dialog. Keep up the good work I hope you can update pretty soon.
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Reviewed By: Reader of this fanfic On: November 24, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^ yay! an update! I like how this is going... its 'somewhat' sweet. ...perfect story, really. please update ^-^
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: November 19, 2003 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man that was great. I love this. I thought that you had stopped updating b/c its been so long. Keep up the good work. Chow Babe \;)
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Reviewed By: "Reader of this fanfic" On: November 10, 2003 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is the best one I ever read, and I read alot. It's so emotional, and well written, everyone was basicaly in character, ect. Please, please, onegai update.
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 08, 2003 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
aaaaaahhhhh update NOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!! Please ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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