| "Brackish" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: mistress 19 On: October 13, 2003 12:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
u have my vote. loved it.
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Reviewed By: lil_miko On: October 09, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i like it a lot but i do think it would be a lot better if u described everything better and if u didnt start every sentence with he or she or Kagome etc. its a great story and im really glad u wrote it ummm well thats about all and dont take my review the wrong way i think ur fic is amazing! well thanks and i'll be back to review some more! SMOOCH ---- KOI
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