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Title: Babam
Reviewed By: blackinkmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2013 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the style of writing. i haven't read this in a long time. thought i'd leave a comment. the banter between the characters is just pure enjoyment.everybody's funny. |
Reviewed By: inyu01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2010 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS FANFIC....I THINK U R AN AWSOME WRITER N I HOPE U CONTINUE WRITING MORE INU FANFICZ..... :)
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Reviewed By: mindslip [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2010 21:44 EDT
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Somehow I managed to read this entire story in the span of one night and a day. I have spring break to thank for this, but I just had to drop in and thank you for all the hard work that went into this story and your dedication. Being a writer myself, I know how beastly it is to update continuously so I really must applaud your inhuman abilities. Anyways, your characterization of Inuyasha was flawless, and the transition into his and Kagome's relationship was smooth and believable. I especially enjoyed the portrayal of Sesshomaru; imagining him as a married man with triplets was incredibly amusing as opposed to his usual status as THE youkai demon of all of Narnia. Or whatever. I don't usually wander about on this site, and it was by mere chance I stumbled on this story really. But I'm glad I did! Good luck on your future writing endeavors, and keep up the creativity.
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Reviewed By: Readers Have Chosen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations! You've been rec'd! The Reader's Have Chosen is a new fanfiction recommendation community dedicated to finding the best of the best in fandoms across the boards, and sharing them with other authors and avid readers. Your story, Dead Famous, has been rec'd and is now being voted on in the Monthly Poll (Inuyasha). Fellow fandom-aficionados will vote for their favorites of all the recommendations, and the stories with the most votes will be posted on the front page. You can find our website at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen . eternflame . com You can find the Inuyasha Monthly Poll at (without spaces): http : // thereadershavechosen. eternflame. com/ forum/ index . php ? topic=991 . new#new Thank you for sharing your work with us!
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Reviewed By: simple127 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2008 23:54 EST
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i wish it would have ended better. like more details of the new happy couple. other than that the story was brilliant! awesome job! ^^
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Reviewed By: adriannrod [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 12:56 EDT
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This was an outstanding fanfiction. I have read a few others similar to this, but this really stood out. I read the entire of the fic over a few days at school, and I can say, honestly, that not a second of that time was wasted. Again, thanks for the awesome read, and the best of luck to you in you future fanfiction endeavors.
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Title: A Few Edits
Reviewed By: Catticus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2008 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your grammar and such are pretty decent, but here are a few pointers: 1. "Gouge" means to carve something out of something else: "I'll gouge your eyes out with a spoon!" What you likely mean is "gauge"; to measure something like a reaction, etc. 2. When there is more than one something, you add an [s] with no apostrophe: "awards". When the something belongs to something or someone else, you have ['s]: "the seat's colour is green". 3. Watch out for incomplete words or words that mean different things but sound the same: "their" (belongs to), "there" (as opposed to here), and "they're" (short for "they are"); "your" (it belongs to you) and "you're" (you are); "then" (not now) and "than" (in comparison: "he's stronger than his opponent"). 4. "Its" means that something belongs to the object in question: "its colour is green". "It's" means "it is": "it's green". A good way to figure out when to use what - when you write the sentence, ask yourself if you can replace the "its" or "it's" with "it is". If you can't, there is no apostrophe needed. Otherwise, I love this story very much. I have read it multiple times and I really enjoy it. You are a talented writer, you just seem to be in need of an editor.
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Reviewed By: BleedingHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 02:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can honestly say that I have read all of your stories, and at least all of them twice. You have such a unique way of drawing the reader in and the humor that you throw in allows me to fall in love with them. You are truly an amazing writer and have been blessed with a beautiful gift, which I hope you use to your advantage in the future. Your writing allows the reader to be taken to a realm that doesn't exist and I can't help but fall into it everytime. Your stories are realistic and that is one thing I look for (instead of the typical Inuyasha and Kagome meet and fall in love before the day ends). Thank you for creating these amazing stories and I wish you the best.
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Reviewed By: catie1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 00:52 EDT
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I have to say I was very entertained and hooked by this original peice , although I thought the ending was a little sudden!! I f you were to write a little more about what happened after ward it would be really good I really like your style and writing!!!I am interested in anything else you have written and am looking for a new anime series to start watching any suggestions for both listed !! p.s TOP RATINGS from me!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: catie1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 00:51 EDT
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I have to say I was very entertained and hooked by this original peice , although I thought the ending was a little sudden!! I f you were to write a little more about what happened after ward it would be really good I really like your style and writing!!!I am interested in anything else you have written and am looking for a new anime series to start watching any suggestions for both listed !! p.s TOP RATINGS from me!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Butterfly kiss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my god. This story is so amazing, I really can't stop reading, and that really pisses my mom off, cuz I'm not really doing all my homework, but I figured I'd just take the time to tell you how much i'm enjoying your story. Oh, and by the way, (I think it was chapter 11, but anyways) The comment about having big feet and no breasts, yeah, thats me, and (just so you know I'm not mad about it, I don't want you getting the wrong idea, I just think its funny how girls get insecure about how small their breasts are) but anyways, I have big feet and small breasts, and it's not as bad as everyone makes it out to be... just thought I'd mention it... It's still an amazing story.
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 19:13 EST
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Lol!! I completely understand Kagome's feelings of not wanting to be pushed around with the crowd, disliking something because it is so popular, but also acknowledging that that is really not a good reason to not like something. But the comedy in this... lol. That is awesome. I am so glad I stumbled on this story!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2008 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that story was amazing... any time that i had free time i would go and finish it... it was soo good..... it was the first thing i thought about when i woke up... it was amazing... great work!!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Eri was right! Your ass is fantastic!" HAHAHAHAHA ....LOL.... THIS PART WAS HILARIOUS!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 16:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the greatest Inu-Yasha fanfics I've read. When I first read the Summary, I had thought the plot was overused, but now I'm really glad I stopped to read it. It took me forever to finish, though (but it was still worth it!) I'm really thankful that you finished the fiction and wrote that epislogue. =P
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Reviewed By: Minitigresa [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 05:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I absolutely LOVE this story and the fluff and the end was soooo cute. U probably dont even read reviews of this fanfic considering that it was finished 3-4 years ago but i just still have to comment. U scared me when u killed Inuyasha for a good 30 seconds of reading, i was devastated, u should have seen my relief when they found out he was still alive, I was praying, thanking God. seriously. Anyways i think this is the 2nd or 3rd story i've read that is written by u (including Bottled Genius) and you are a great writer, i know u must get this a lot but ur hilarious in your writing; i especially love the scene where Kagome got drunk. I wish it was possible to publish your fanfics tho cause i'm a big fan, i would definately buy them. Well, annyways, continue doing what u doing cause u doing it well.
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Title: Jesus.........
Reviewed By: Gossip Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 10:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy ****. I totally loved this fic. I'm kind of sad that you won't be writing a sequel or a prequel to this, but I guess that's okay. From the looks of it, Rozefire, you haven't been writing on mm.org for about a year. Your last fic, Zero-G is still unfinished!!!! Still, all I can do is hope to god that you'll keep writing, and you may even be good enough to write a book! I'll keep an eye out for when that happens. LOL. So, you know you love me. -GG
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg it took me three days to read ur whole story and it was soo good
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:36 EDT
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this fanfic was aswome!!!! ppl had to pry me off the computer!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! awsomeness-ness la. keep up the coolio-o moe la. work hope you can write another!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 22:36 EDT
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this fanfic was aswome!!!! ppl had to pry me off the computer!!!!!!!! i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!! awsomeness-ness la. keep up the coolio-o moe la. work hope you can write another!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 20:52 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! ^.^ so how did you like it in Arizona? (i live here...there...(which is it?)) ^_~ Just curious.
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know this is problably one of your old stories btu i loved it!!! i took like a week to finish this story considering i read 24/7 its on eof my favs and i cant wait to read the other ones you've written. how i wish i was as good as you.^^ awsome job!!!
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Reviewed By: luvme4eternity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 08:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story was fantastic and I'm glad that I found it by chance. You really did an outstanding job with this. To me it was perfect. You get 100 pts from me lol. Well take care and keep the good work up. By the way I agree with you on how some reviews are rude. They truely are, and no writer should have to put up with that bullshyt. Well bye for now, I look forward to reading some more of your work sometime soon.
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 19:25 EDT
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you are a goddess! i have read this story i don't know how many times. i don't know if you write anymore and due to your not updating of Zero-G i guess i'm right with that one. still you are one of my favorite writers and i definetly am a fan of your excellent work.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE STUPIDEST FIC I EVERY READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!....................................................................... ........................................................................... ......................................................................Just kidding, to tell the truth, it was the greatest one I haave read so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GREAT JOB!!!! P.S. sorry people pestered you about your up dating. Ja ne!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it!!!! it was the funniest fic i read!
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Reviewed By: InuSaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the fact that you're being plaigerized got me thinking: I've never even read the original. Ususally, I'm not big on AU, but I give you two thumbs up for this story. Aside from a few typos and punctuation errors, I saw little fault with the story. The characterizations were very good, especailly Kagome, and anyone who makes me laugh ingratiates themselves to me forevah. Good plot, nice progression, and I commend you for not resorting to lemons to enhance the romance factor. However, I'm sure you're probably aware that "fag" has a different meaning completely in the US, so "Stole my fags" and "quit the fags" made me giggle for immature reasons that shame me. Also, I thought it was weird that Kaede was Inu-papa's sister. She's human, right? He was demon. Was she adopted? Anyway, good job and I really enjoyed. I'm going back to the writing I neglected in favor of this. One more thing I found strange. I have one story on my faves list,and there was an 8 month dry spell between updates. Seriously, those people couldn't wait two weeks? Time to up the dose, people.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 21:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm glad i found this story since i've been wanting to read something this holidays... and all i got to say is OMG! this fic is the best i've ever read! the plot was completely new (to me since i've never read something like this before) and the story went from funny to dramatic to romantic and... just a big blur of genres! but i loved it! every part of it! although i did find some spelling mistakes but the story sure made them up! okay, so to make this review less... um... long? i will end it with EXELLENT JOB!
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 12:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story so much... it was awsome!!! I heard about how good your writing was so I checked you out and im glade I did... now imma read another one of your stories so you'll prob be hearing from me again!! JA!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: LeFrouFrou [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 02:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is probably one of the best InuYasha Fan Fictions I have ever read. I hope you write more soon! Im also sad to hear about the impatient people who were waiting for your updates. Well, to Hell with them. I love your work and hope to find more of your Fan Fic's out there!
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