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Reviewed By: Kym On: January 22, 2004 09:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::bangs head against a wall:: V_V it still hasn't showed the whole stupid review. okay, just forget i reviewed anyway... I'm sorry Kate!
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Title: Chapter Nine Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 22:01 EST
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That was wonderful. It was exciting at the beginning, and had enough ... I don't know what the hell you'd call it from the middle on... well, enough of *that* to make me sit here with a happy smile and sigh to myself. Almost like WAFF without the cuddling that usually causes it. :P Great work! I'll have to pick up here later, I've already stayed late enough at work to finish these last few chapters. But I really don't want to stop reading when I know there's so much more to go...
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Title: Chapter Eight Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 21:38 EST
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I about died when the two of them happened to get into the car Kagome had chosen to hide in. I clapped my hand over my mouth so hard at that point that I thought one of my coworkers would come rushing in to see what the fuss was about. And I have to wonder, what in the *world* could Kagome have done to Kouga that would make him scream?? *snicker* Perhaps I don't want to know... On to the next chapter I go.... Great work!
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Title: Chapter Seven Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 21:16 EST
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I *almost* gagged at Kikyo's way-too-motivating speech... but then, I figured it fit the role perfectly. *laugh* I loved Kagome's action with the door number and the permanent marker, I think I would like to do that someday, given the unlikely opportunity... But I'm not able to *be* openly evil, just able to *think* about being openly evil. And I was *NOT* expecting that final line of action. Caught me off guard and reeled me in to want more. Now I must read on to see what the hell just happened. Great job!
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Reviewed By: InuKitusneMiko(not signed in) On: January 21, 2004 18:35 EST
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OMG! PLEASE PLEASE DON'T TAKE 2 LONG! THIS IS SOOOOO GOOD! ^^ UPDATE SOON PLEASE! no pressure of course! ^^;;
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Title: Chapter Six Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:55 EST
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Wow, that was a sobering turn of events, with Inuyasha's shocking actions and Kagome finding him half dead. Kind of gets me down when I think of people doing things like that, but, not everything is sugar and cookies. Guess I should put off reading more before I'm late for a meeting. I'm really enjoying this story, and I hate to wait to get on to the next chapter, especially since it's only a few clicks away. *sigh*
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Title: Chapter Five Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:37 EST
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Ok, I was supposed to have gone to get lunch, but it looks like I won't be going anywhere for a bit. Yikes! If I could toss together a shout like Kagome did, I would be one world class arguer. I'm horrible in arguments, I can't ever think of the riht things to say. Hence, my husband always wins, unless I cry. Good god I'm such a baby sometimes. I'm so amused that Kagome is such a straightforward person! Great job with this chapter, and on I go to the next.
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Title: Chapter Four Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:18 EST
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Damn, I was supposed to have gone to lunch. That was a very amusing scene in the restaurant. I really like how you've portrayed Kagome, knowing several languages and being pretty damned smart. Poor girl would probably be the top of her class in the anime if she weren't always so busy with her damned quest in the past... I liked her sneaky translations, too, those were great. :P Do you know French??
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Title: Chapter Three
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 16:56 EST
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That argument in the limo was priceless. I have a bad feeling I'm not going to be able to stop reading this fic here soon... so I need to take a break and find something more productive to do before I forget I'm at work!! *hides* Great writing! I can only point out this tiny thing, a few of the contractions you've used are incorrect, but they're such tiny mistakes that it would be kind of silly to post a revision for them. :P *falls over*
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Reviewed By: ambition On: January 21, 2004 16:55 EST
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This is one of my current favorite stories...and I really want to know what's going to happen!
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Reviewed By: ambition On: January 21, 2004 16:55 EST
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This is one of my current favorite stories...and I really want to know what's going to happen!
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Title: Chapter Two Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 16:30 EST
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*hand meets forehead* I was hoping she wouldn't faint upon meeting him, but, I guess it just wouldn't work any other way. *laugh* I couldn't possibly begin to imagine reacting any other way, myself, to meeting someone that famous, even if I didn't particularily like him/her. Great job on this chapter - on to Chapter three!
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Title: Chapter One Review
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 16:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've put off reading this one for a while, since I thought it would be just another one like [those that were mentioned in the ID forums under the totally confused thread] but, now that I've read that thread, I've made my effort to get my butt over here and see where it all started! This is SO much better than the stories I skimmed through a month ago, and I'm hoping I can remember to leave a nifty review after each chapter. I can't leave encouraging things yet, though, I have so much more to read. *falls over* *big hug* Doing great, and on to chapter two!
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Reviewed By: neokey On: January 21, 2004 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I have read. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: -[Jus/Tin]- On: January 21, 2004 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I read the whole thing in 2 days (talk about too much time on my hands). Its wonderful greatness! Eh, I gave you an 8 on spelling and grammar...I know you try to correct them, but....eh, typo demons came in and put them back! Update lots more! o.o;;
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