| "To Mend A Broken Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: 1fanoveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Hey, I have a suggestion for ya' - how 'bout in the next chap, you get the reaction of her parents or of the Z Gang of them being a couple? That'd be nice, don'tcha' think? Anyway, can't wait for the next update! ^__________________________________^
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Reviewed By: Um On: November 17, 2003 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, um.... If you want to go AU I have yet to see anyone get the reactions of Chichi at this time in the story. I mean, after the obvious next scene. I mean you wouldn't want to give the poor man blueballs would you?
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Reviewed By: Crystal aka Angel Tinuviel On: November 16, 2003 03:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey love your story. I wish i had some suggestions but when it comes to B/V i cant think of any for fear of cliches and oocness. either vegetas too nice or too mean to be realistic. and yet we never get a chance to understand how he would act alone with bulma because relationships are severely downplayed. oh well its your fic just think about what you want to happen eventually and not just obvious stuff like pregnancy with trunks and go from there. think about how your going to get to that certain point. i'm sure you'll think of something. ^__^
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 08, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!:D
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Reviewed By: mona On: October 08, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!:D
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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