| "Civil Blood Makes Civil Hands Unclean" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Awwwwwwwwwwwww!
Reviewed By: Dreamfox WindWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was TOO KAWAII!!!Shippo+Rin=GOOD COUPLE!!!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Yaffa Madel On: June 22, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story!!! Though i have to say the title distressed me some... i was sooooo scared they would die in the end like romeo and juliet... *wipes sweat from brow.. cute story!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Lauren*321 On: June 22, 2004 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story!!! Though i have to say the title distresses me some... Er... I know where it is from, so please i ask you PLEASE dont make them die in the end!!!! waaaaaaaaa i cried when i read that play!!!
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Reviewed By: Misery Child [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! This is so great! And the whole Romeo and Juilet vibe. And Rin & Shippo are too cute. Great story!
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww.... How Sweet!!!!!........And Sesshou and Inu getting along? Now thats a surprise!!! Hehe!! ~Miyumi
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Title: Civil Blood Makes Civil Hands Unclean
Reviewed By: sesshyskoishii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 03:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rarely have come across this pairing...definitely refreshing! Rin and Shippou have often been territory unventored; when they truly deserved recongnition. I am truly looking forward to seeing this story unfold!
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Title: You done did it again....
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok now tell how did you happen to slip this chapter by me without me knowing you were working on it? Sneaky Crash! Anyway, very interesting I love the relationships between the parents and their kids. Keep it up, I can't wait to see what's so terrible that's going to happen...oh yea no more sneaky stuff missy! Riomi MUHA!
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Title: KEEP GOING!!!
Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhhhh i love your fic!!! i goin to assume it is sess/kag. u might have told us somewhere, but o well ^_^ CONTINUE!!!
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Reviewed By: firestarter8811 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 20:22 CST
Comment/Review:
good what are the characters names and their fathers names come on and update
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Reviewed By: jetblackraven On: October 29, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok that was so.....weird.but i enjoyed it.alli want to know is who the two peoples were.i mean you have to let us know.dont leave us confused and hangin.i loved your story it was....romantic (LOL).i am so messed up i need help.anyway hope you continue with this its really good!GO DO YOU STUFF!OMFG IVE GONE MENTAL.(nope i always like this)have fun with this story.hehehe!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Riomi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you have done it again...I can't wait til you update. So let's see...when will that be cause i know that you have like a thousand other ideas and fanfics just waiting for you. Anyway i really like you have like 4 typos but hey so do i...lol Hugs! BTW i updated Torn so take a look...when you computer is all better...lol XD Remember i'm not a trouble maker...or am i...lol Riomi
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Reviewed By: Apathy5 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was very interesting. You had me going for quite some time. I never thought about a story about them. That was cool. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for them.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: October 14, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please...continue or i will find you and rip your Balls off.
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Title: I think I know!
Reviewed By: Narakusmiasma [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was this Rin and Shippou?? Cause, with the leaves, and reformed arm and how he had a mother and father and she only had a father....I think I'm right!! I hope I'm right! I hope you keep going with this! Rin and Shippou stories are rare!!! ^^
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