| "Twisted Love" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Juridemo On: October 10, 2003 16:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Definately should have Kag pick Sesshy.... if she picked Inu, it would be too much for me to bear :( So make it Sess/kag :) BuhBye!!!!!
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Reviewed By: faye45 On: October 10, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make it a Sess/Kagome fic! PLEASE
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! lol please update!!!! I love Sesshy but I'm not quite sure about who Kagome should choose. Inu does love her, but I think Sesshy does too. O well, I LOVE IT!!!!!! SO UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: October 10, 2003 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is crazy ! she's crazy ! is getting good , keep writing , i think i want her to stay with sesshy , but you gotta add more stuff to it . break it down more , cuz she just can't choose someone over the other in three days . impossible . if she stays with sess , make inuyasha saty with someon , make it a happy ending for everyone.
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Title: You never know
Reviewed By: Author of this story On: October 10, 2003 08:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
To all my readers! You never know what will happen. I have had some good suggestions about the ending of this story and let me tell you, I ain't close to being finished yet with those three! I was going to end it in 10 chapters or less, but I have this story running on two sites now, and I am getting wonderful reviews asking for more. So, I am gonna make it a little more intresting, and shock the heck out of you people! Yet in order to do that, I am gonna have to make it a little longer, with a little more detail and a little less fluff! I agree that Kag/Sessh are getting along too well right now. Don't worry there will be a nice fight between Sessh/Kag, Kag/Inu and Inu/Sessh and even all three at once before we are done. And definately more lemon for those who enjoy that stuff. Man I am having so much fun with this! LOL Don't mind me, I am just proud of my first fan fic ever and haven't had any sleep while trying to outline my next chapter. I never expected people to like it...LOL or even read it! Thank you everyone! Keep checking, I will try and put at least one-two chapters out a day. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Diva On: October 10, 2003 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that Kagome should choose Sesshoumaru, because she was always second best in Inuyasha´s heart and she knows it. Therefore, she will never be sure if he would have chosen her if Kikyou was alive, and, as time goes by, Inuyasha eventually will think that if Kagome was Kikyou, she´d never have given in to Sesshoumaru. No one can ever de happy with this doubt in their hearts.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[sess/kag] a sad but good story please update soon thanks
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Reviewed By: EvilNekoEatsYourSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 07:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ Although I'm a big Sesshoumaru fan I'd have to say that I think Inuyasha deserves her in this story. They love each other and Sesshoumaru sort of just jumped in there and was all 'I want you for Rin' and blah blah blah... But actually, now that I think about it I'd probably be happy with either of them because they both have their pros and cons.... Let Kagome have both of them lol... just kidding... that possibility would put both Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru waaaaaay out of character... I'll stop rambling now. Byee ^_^
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Reviewed By: Fishfisk On: October 09, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mm.. kawaii desu. Stick her with Inuyasha. I like that it's a Sesshy fic that didn't make him a villain- and it doesn't go too out of character with Inuyasha or Kagome. Inuyasha, refusing to ask Kouga for help? Yeah. That's him.
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Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: October 09, 2003 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy enjoy this fic.make it Inu yasha/kagome please, my reasoning is thatkagome is realy loyal.she wouldn't be able to forget inu yasha for someone who kidnapped her and forced himself on her.
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Title: Response
Reviewed By: The Author of this On: October 09, 2003 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
yasmin, Sesshy didn't actually FORCE her... he just used a little demanding persuasion. He is not a rapist and I am sorry if he came out to be one. He is just...well controlling as you know. Everything has to be his way. I will try not to make it too long. I am working on Chapter 5 now. I mean I have written all this in less than 48 hours...LOL my brain needs a break. I am hoping to keep it to 10Chapters or less. Also.. Give me opinions of who Kagome should stay with! Sesshy or Inuyasha.... I might listen, I might not...LOL It just depends on my mood.
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good...but now I really feel sorry for Sessy...he's just so lonely...*sigh* Anyways...UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: October 09, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is crazy ! Is like she actually feels something for sesshy , even though he practikly raped her. I mean love sesshy - he's my favorite character but never imagined him as a rapist. NOT COOL! I'm still intrigued. Keep writing. Wanna know how it ends , just don't make it too long. In my opion fanfics get boring if they're tooooooo long , Know what i mean.
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Reviewed By: Lady of the Western Lands 17 On: October 09, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let kag fall for Sessy! They are my fave couple! Have Inu watch Kag willing give in to Sessy because she's in love with the demon lord...that would be AWESOME!!! KAG and SESSY, KAG and SESSY!, KAG and SESSY!!!!!!! Great story! Looking forward to more!
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Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS ORIGINAL AND INTRESTING I LIKE TO SEE NEW IDEAS...THIS IS NEW..KINDA. I THINK THAT IT SHOULD BE A SESS/KAGOME.....LIKE MAKE KAGOME SOME HOW FALL IN LOVE WITH SESS. OR MAKE HER FEEL TO LOW FOR INU AND TELL HIM TO MATE WITH ANOTHER OR SOMETHING...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! UPDATE AGAIN SOON! JA NE.
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