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Title: Sesshy!!!
Reviewed By: lady_gumi On: October 11, 2003 12:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
DEFINATELY A SESSHY AND KAGOME FIC. YEP, THAT'S WHAT IT SHOULD BE!
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Title: tsubasa
Reviewed By: scarredbride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 10:03 CDT
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Hey I am fine with critz. Iny is a little OOC, but that is the wonderful thing about FanFic, you can do whatever you want to them!!! LOL, if we wanted it to be just like the show...well, go watch it then! Let me read some of your stories and I can give you some constructive critz. LOL Besides, maybe you should re-read about how this is my first fanfic, might be the reason it is not extremely original in your mind. Oh well.. thanks for the comments.. and trust me, you could never hurt my feelings, cuz if somehow if you managed to, well all that would happen is you could become an interesting character in future stories...LOL
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Reviewed By: tsubasa On: October 10, 2003 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay. Not too orginal, and it's not really grabbing me in any way. Inuyasha seems oddly OOC and not in a good way. Sorry, just mentioning I can be a harsh reviewer so don't take it too personally. I have a lot more to say but I'm afraid to hurt your feelings so I'll stop now.
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Reviewed By: yasmin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok , now im scared for kagome . Whats gonna happen next ! sess is crazy in the first place , wanting someone that didnt want him ni that way in th efirst place . i think thats wrong , but what can you do , sessy is sessy. inuyasha has the chance now to tell her how he feels if not sesshy is gonna beat himt o it . oh-oh! update please!!!!!!im addicted now!! what have you done to meeeeeeeeeee.
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
[Sess/Kag] I really love your story, can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!!!!!! :)
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Reviewed By: YupPerZ On: October 10, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It thinks it should be sess with kag. YupPerZ
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Reviewed By: any1 On: October 10, 2003 16:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
sesshoumaru/kagome
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Reviewed By: Juridemo On: October 10, 2003 16:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Definately should have Kag pick Sesshy.... if she picked Inu, it would be too much for me to bear :( So make it Sess/kag :) BuhBye!!!!!
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Reviewed By: faye45 On: October 10, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Make it a Sess/Kagome fic! PLEASE
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! lol please update!!!! I love Sesshy but I'm not quite sure about who Kagome should choose. Inu does love her, but I think Sesshy does too. O well, I LOVE IT!!!!!! SO UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: October 10, 2003 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is crazy ! she's crazy ! is getting good , keep writing , i think i want her to stay with sesshy , but you gotta add more stuff to it . break it down more , cuz she just can't choose someone over the other in three days . impossible . if she stays with sess , make inuyasha saty with someon , make it a happy ending for everyone.
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Title: You never know
Reviewed By: Author of this story On: October 10, 2003 08:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
To all my readers! You never know what will happen. I have had some good suggestions about the ending of this story and let me tell you, I ain't close to being finished yet with those three! I was going to end it in 10 chapters or less, but I have this story running on two sites now, and I am getting wonderful reviews asking for more. So, I am gonna make it a little more intresting, and shock the heck out of you people! Yet in order to do that, I am gonna have to make it a little longer, with a little more detail and a little less fluff! I agree that Kag/Sessh are getting along too well right now. Don't worry there will be a nice fight between Sessh/Kag, Kag/Inu and Inu/Sessh and even all three at once before we are done. And definately more lemon for those who enjoy that stuff. Man I am having so much fun with this! LOL Don't mind me, I am just proud of my first fan fic ever and haven't had any sleep while trying to outline my next chapter. I never expected people to like it...LOL or even read it! Thank you everyone! Keep checking, I will try and put at least one-two chapters out a day. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Diva On: October 10, 2003 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that Kagome should choose Sesshoumaru, because she was always second best in Inuyasha´s heart and she knows it. Therefore, she will never be sure if he would have chosen her if Kikyou was alive, and, as time goes by, Inuyasha eventually will think that if Kagome was Kikyou, she´d never have given in to Sesshoumaru. No one can ever de happy with this doubt in their hearts.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[sess/kag] a sad but good story please update soon thanks
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Reviewed By: EvilNekoEatsYourSoul [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 07:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
^_^ Although I'm a big Sesshoumaru fan I'd have to say that I think Inuyasha deserves her in this story. They love each other and Sesshoumaru sort of just jumped in there and was all 'I want you for Rin' and blah blah blah... But actually, now that I think about it I'd probably be happy with either of them because they both have their pros and cons.... Let Kagome have both of them lol... just kidding... that possibility would put both Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru waaaaaay out of character... I'll stop rambling now. Byee ^_^
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