| "Twisted Love" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fishfisk On: October 09, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mm.. kawaii desu. Stick her with Inuyasha. I like that it's a Sesshy fic that didn't make him a villain- and it doesn't go too out of character with Inuyasha or Kagome. Inuyasha, refusing to ask Kouga for help? Yeah. That's him.
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Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: October 09, 2003 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I realy enjoy this fic.make it Inu yasha/kagome please, my reasoning is thatkagome is realy loyal.she wouldn't be able to forget inu yasha for someone who kidnapped her and forced himself on her.
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Title: Response
Reviewed By: The Author of this On: October 09, 2003 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
yasmin, Sesshy didn't actually FORCE her... he just used a little demanding persuasion. He is not a rapist and I am sorry if he came out to be one. He is just...well controlling as you know. Everything has to be his way. I will try not to make it too long. I am working on Chapter 5 now. I mean I have written all this in less than 48 hours...LOL my brain needs a break. I am hoping to keep it to 10Chapters or less. Also.. Give me opinions of who Kagome should stay with! Sesshy or Inuyasha.... I might listen, I might not...LOL It just depends on my mood.
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good...but now I really feel sorry for Sessy...he's just so lonely...*sigh* Anyways...UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: October 09, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is crazy ! Is like she actually feels something for sesshy , even though he practikly raped her. I mean love sesshy - he's my favorite character but never imagined him as a rapist. NOT COOL! I'm still intrigued. Keep writing. Wanna know how it ends , just don't make it too long. In my opion fanfics get boring if they're tooooooo long , Know what i mean.
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Reviewed By: Lady of the Western Lands 17 On: October 09, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let kag fall for Sessy! They are my fave couple! Have Inu watch Kag willing give in to Sessy because she's in love with the demon lord...that would be AWESOME!!! KAG and SESSY, KAG and SESSY!, KAG and SESSY!!!!!!! Great story! Looking forward to more!
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Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS ORIGINAL AND INTRESTING I LIKE TO SEE NEW IDEAS...THIS IS NEW..KINDA. I THINK THAT IT SHOULD BE A SESS/KAGOME.....LIKE MAKE KAGOME SOME HOW FALL IN LOVE WITH SESS. OR MAKE HER FEEL TO LOW FOR INU AND TELL HIM TO MATE WITH ANOTHER OR SOMETHING...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! UPDATE AGAIN SOON! JA NE.
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