| "Bloody Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Tanzanite Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 07:46 CDT
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oh, that was soo sad. i'm still crying. i love this fic. the ending was sad, but happy. i mean like, both of them died, but atleast one didn't have to be left alone to suffer for th rest of his life. well done.
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Reviewed By: lovelessaibou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
two words....i cried. I cried so much, after Rei died. As soon as he did, I knew that Kai would to. But I would think of it as suicide. They way you did it was so good. I'm still crying right now. They were buried in the same coffin? I have never heard of that one. I especially love the inscription. I have one question, were they buried in America or Japan? It probably said so in the story, but I was too busy crying to notice. The ending was really good too. I think that this story could have been pulled out into more chapters. Like the chapter where Rei and Kai confess their secrects to eachother, you could have explained it a bit more. But all in all, I loved it I really did. Stupid what's his face....he sucks monkey balls.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles* This was a truly sad story but in the end they were together. Great story! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: Demon_Maiden On: June 16, 2004 05:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first story on this site that i have read. I have read many thing ang this deserves a great rating (i cried when they died). This story truely promotes a sense of..guyish beauty. I think everyone should read this, plese write another story, (maybe with a happy ending but i'm sure would be just as good), good luck with your writing career you have talent.
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Reviewed By: Reis love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 03:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniff, sniff* That was so beautiful. It almost made me cry, not many fics can do that.*sniff* well g2g. bye. Rei and Kai Together For Ever.*sniff*
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Reviewed By: *~Salima~* On: January 27, 2004 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad *sniffles*. The fanfic was great but you killed my two favourite characters!!! It was so sad when Uuji held the gun to Kai's neck and Kai smiled realising he will be with Rei again. *sobs*. But why kill Rei and Kai, why didn't you just kill that bastard, Uuji. If I get a hold of him I'll wring his neck for what he did to Kai!!! Oh and Ray!!! Great work but can you make one with a happy ending next time please!!!! If there is a happy ending I feel good about myself for the rest of the day yay!!!! Sad endings kind of depress me a bit, you should put a warning next time like: Warning: do not read if you get sad or depressed easily. Anyway keep up the good work!!!!! Salima
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Reviewed By: *~Salima~* On: January 27, 2004 16:53 CST
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That was so sad *sniffles*. The fanfic was great but you killed my two favourite characters!!! It was so sad when Uuji held the gun to Kai's neck and Kai smiled realising he will be with Rei again. *sobs*. But why kill Rei and Kai, why didn't you just kill that bastard, Uuji. If I get a hold of him I'll wring his neck for what he did to Kai!!! Oh and Ray!!! Great work but can you make one with a happy ending next time please!!!! If there is a happy ending I feel good about myself for the rest of the day yay!!!! Sad endings kind of depress me a bit, you should put a warning next time like: Warning: do not read if you get sad or depressed easily. Anyway keep up the good work!!!!! Salima
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Reviewed By: *~Salima~* On: January 27, 2004 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad *sniffles*. The fanfic was great but you killed my two favourite characters!!! It was so sad when Uuji held the gun to Kai's neck and Kai smiled realising he will be with Rei again. *sobs*. But why kill Rei and Kai, why didn't you just kill that bastard, Uuji. If I get a hold of him I'll wring his neck for what he did to Kai!!! Oh and Ray!!! Great work but can you make one with a happy ending next time please!!!! If there is a happy ending I feel good about myself for the rest of the day yay!!!! Sad endings kind of depress me a bit, you should put a warning next time like: Warning: do not read if you get sad or depressed easily. Anyway keep up the good work!!!!! Salima
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Reviewed By: Dark_Selene On: December 14, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad!!!! What have love done to you?? WHY DID U KILL REI?? OF ALL PPL!!! And then you kill Kai (whose death strangely sounded appropiate) anyway the fic was really good! n I almost cried when Kai spoke but life goes on.. (wait it doesn't for them O_o) Although I hated how the ending (never been one to cope with death) I hope u make a fic with a happy ending (or at least don't kill Rei or Kai for that matter maybe Mariah??) coz this one was really good
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Title: Cry
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahhhh don't like you you evil twisted cruel writer. You killed them, you monster you killed Rei and then Kai. I hate you I really hate you go to hell with your evil characters. Wait thats it lets Kill Uuji. When I get my hands on that peice of crap I'll kill him, yay I'll kill him. Ahem (sniff sob sniff) It was really good (You killed them you monster) Ok except that you are really cruel how can you do that to Rei. Nevertheless you could of made it a more happy ending (sniff so sad). like Iwas ready for the characters dying but not in the horrible way you did. I tink you should have included more detail about the Blade Demons. I think despite all of the above you did a great fic that eventually is a sad ending. Keep it up and next time kill Tyson or something not Rei he's to cute to kill. The buisness man? Meh I hate those suit case carrying pervets. Can you beleive that one groped me when I was twelve eww I hate them. Anyway Great fic.
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