| "Bathroom Antics" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: runfromamericanguns On: March 18, 2005 07:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute!^_________^ what a perfect way to spend my day off! Milkshakes and my fav couple, well, ya know... That was hilarious! I think I know another reason Tohma didn't disaprove. *winks* By the way I am a MAJOR K fan! I've even made a shrine to him! No, sadly I'm not madly in love with him. I just wish he would adopt me!!!
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Reviewed By: Ymmu On: June 12, 2004 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwaaa~~~ That was really enticing....So yummy. XD You should write mooooooreeee. Muahahahaha!! Great fic btw.
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Reviewed By: Ryrychan On: February 08, 2004 16:08 CST
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Ok, just hadda comment... bathroom lube, use soap. Why do I say that? Cause I'm a perv. Yay! Hiro and K! Er... *Coughs and goes back to being a closet Hiro/K fan*
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Reviewed By: Takara On: January 06, 2004 14:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow~ It isn't often I find such a beautifully well-written PWP fan fic. And KxHiro nonetheless! ^_^ I enjoyed it very much, especially since they both enjoyed it... instead of the usual screaming bloody murder rape. XD Ah well, good job! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 19:22 CDT
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lol funny and very nicely written...i comend u!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Garvitation? Ha ha your beta reader missed a few. I would have overlooked looked it, but have you said Garvitation out loud? It sounds so funny! *snicker* Great story, very sexy. I kinda guessed it was a bathroom, it was the tile thing.
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Title: I love ya!
Reviewed By: Brandi Koi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't know how much of a K x Hiro fan I am.. I loved this fanfic.. Thanks so much for writing it!
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