| "Afura Mann; The Magnificent Babe" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: AngelicDisaster On: April 06, 2004 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
..Eh, I was amused.
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Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're not bad. I loved two of your other stories. When will you write a third chapter to Sakura Wars NC-17 story? I can't wait for you to write and upload a new chapter to your SAkura Wars story. I want you to have Ohgami to screw every girl especially Iris PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Major victory On: October 14, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Terrific story. Awesome. Keep on writing.
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