| "Stormy,Lemony, Night" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: bakuragurl04 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 06:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good (and i don't think yami scares anyone) please please continue!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: joei On: July 26, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was definatly good for only your first lemon. you said that you wanted help, well give me an email, (jshadowcat90@yahoo.com) and i'll help ya out ^_~ can't wait to talk!
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Reviewed By: the twited bich from hell On: February 21, 2004 08:15 CST
Comment/Review:
good PWP me and the vios in my mind have one thing to say LOWD.
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Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: February 21, 2004 03:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good first lemon. I had no idea Yugi and Yami would be so noisy!! ~_o Write more fics!!
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Title: bakurasgirl..can't log in
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 18:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a good lemon for your first. Was Yugi and Yami already intimate once before Yami took Yugi? Otherwise, without prep, even the lotion would not have been enough. But, it was very good.
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Reviewed By: Anime_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 17:51 CDT
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Reviewed By: Anime_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhm, wow this was good! I wish you had more to that!
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Reviewed By: yasha On: October 10, 2003 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story i luved it! and i was the first to review lucky me!!! ^-^
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