| "A Small Piece of Heaven" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mioki On: February 03, 2011 02:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really love the story, but I would love to read another chapter! Is there going to be one? |
Reviewed By: shill On: October 12, 2004 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are soooo awesome! Please, please, please write more! Your so great with details and getting in how each character feels. Don't shorten your stuff, long chapters are the best. You know what they say, 'if you've got it, flaunt it' and trust me, you've got it!!
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Title: PLEASE!!!!
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 00:34 EDT
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UPDATE this fic will you please!!! What is the matter with you this is such a great fic i can't even think way you would not want to add more to it. How can you take this long in not updating it. WHY? WHY? please, please, please update this fic SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 00:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please update this fic! I really want to find out what is going to happen, and right now I am on pins and needles waiting for an update. Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
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Title: please
Reviewed By: yukai_tenchi16 On: May 31, 2004 23:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and update this fic and no other but this one. PLEASE + 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 00000000000000000000000... you must update SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!! -fayli
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Reviewed By: RianneHime On: May 27, 2004 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! I've always liked 13x5x6 and you've written a marvelous one! I won't really get into detail (it'd take too long . . .) Eh . . . no one ever read anonymous reviews anyway, so I'll just gratuitously add to your review count, hmm? ^.^
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Title: chapter 28
Reviewed By: Sara chan On: May 23, 2004 08:25 EDT
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I'm glad to finally see ch.28. it looks that the story is getting even more exciting from now on. I'm sure the next chapter will be even more interesting then this one. I can't wait for Quatr to enter the stage.
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Reviewed By: Little_Bay On: May 21, 2004 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this such an awsome ass fic. i luv your style of writin. i can't wait to read the nex chap.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ajooba On: May 15, 2004 13:55 EDT
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Oh I'm glad to see you've made it so far, to be honest I didn't know that it can also be found here I always looked for updates at GWFA. I hope ,now that you've finally reversived it, to see a lot of updates soon.
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Title: a small piece of heaven
Reviewed By: armybratt 16 On: May 14, 2004 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always liked your style of writing and all that other stuff. And I'm impressed that you managed to write a chapter every day i look forward to reading the rest!
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Title: a small piece of heaven
Reviewed By: armybratt 16 On: May 14, 2004 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always liked your style of writing and all that other stuff. And I'm impressed that you managed to write a chapter every day i look forward to reading the rest!
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Title: Ch. 27
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been enjoying this fic alot, but this chapter jarred me. Trust is such an issue with W. and T. and M had worked hard to gain it. But erotic spanking (which I have no problem with, btw) requires a tremendous degree of trust and I just didn't feel W was there yet. It made T and M seem rather predatory, as if they'd bribed him with all those presents to get this from him. But that's just one opinion and just one incident. Otherwise, it's all coming along really well and I look forward to more! Hope T acquires a few other slaves wtih familiar faces, too! ;-)
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Sonnet On: May 12, 2004 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapture and the updating is soo good. In chapture 25 in the end I can't believe that Milliardo said "I'm trying master" as if he did not trust Treize to keep him. If Milliardo loved him then way was he trying to trust his? Besides that I loved the captures sooo very much. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: amifreeman On: May 11, 2004 19:17 EDT
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Please never end this fic. I Love it soooooooo very, very much(starts to cry she likes it so much.) A very good chapture once again. I enjoy how fast you are at updating fast...ja ne
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this decadent fic! And your speedy updates, too. What a clifhanger! Can't wait to see if Treize is really really pleased or really really unhappyt!
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