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Title: Ch. 27
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 16:20 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been enjoying this fic alot, but this chapter jarred me. Trust is such an issue with W. and T. and M had worked hard to gain it. But erotic spanking (which I have no problem with, btw) requires a tremendous degree of trust and I just didn't feel W was there yet. It made T and M seem rather predatory, as if they'd bribed him with all those presents to get this from him. But that's just one opinion and just one incident. Otherwise, it's all coming along really well and I look forward to more! Hope T acquires a few other slaves wtih familiar faces, too! ;-)
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: Sonnet On: May 12, 2004 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapture and the updating is soo good. In chapture 25 in the end I can't believe that Milliardo said "I'm trying master" as if he did not trust Treize to keep him. If Milliardo loved him then way was he trying to trust his? Besides that I loved the captures sooo very much. Keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: amifreeman On: May 11, 2004 19:17 EDT
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Please never end this fic. I Love it soooooooo very, very much(starts to cry she likes it so much.) A very good chapture once again. I enjoy how fast you are at updating fast...ja ne
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this decadent fic! And your speedy updates, too. What a clifhanger! Can't wait to see if Treize is really really pleased or really really unhappyt!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 17:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story soooo much. I'm only on chapture 12 and wow. One thing I noticed is that Milliardo rode Noble bet Noble was almost a year old. I don't think that can be because you have to wait at least until the horse is two years befor you can back the horse( that is when a person gets on the horse for the first time). It is possable to put a saddle on the horse befor someone rides them and begin their trainning early, but the horse can not ridden at such an age as was in the story. Besides that I can't wait to read more and please up date soon...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: May 09, 2004 17:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh Lord. What an evil place to leave it. I believe that you did that on purpose, didn't you?
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Reviewed By: Youkai Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 14:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for another great chapter. I love this story and can't wait to see all the other characters come into play. I love the fact that this story is so long because you are trying to really capture the feelings behind each character. Love the updates that come sop often, keep up the good work.
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Title: small peice of heaven
Reviewed By: sadako17 On: May 06, 2004 20:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i've read all your chapters that you have writen so far and their really good. so i really do mean all the ratings that i gave you.
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Reviewed By: Darcia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God Ireally love this fict! I can't believe I haven't given any reviews yet. Ihe grammar is great and easy to read. Even For me hows first language isn't English (which you can probaply tell easily ^~). Keep up the grat work!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: May 06, 2004 13:52 EDT
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Excellent, wonderful and enjoyable, your writting's skills are excellent. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: May 06, 2004 11:38 EDT
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I really hope that there will be 5x6x13!^_^
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: May 05, 2004 13:24 EDT
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Oooh! Is Milliardo gonna get jealous of Wufei?
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: May 05, 2004 02:28 EDT
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I was wondering when you wre going to update. I was waitiing with baited breath!^_^
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 23, 2004 21:02 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have written to many reviews ..I just don't know what to say any more ?.. Amm I could say ,I love this chapter,But I've said that even though I do love this chapter but that is getting old ...or I could say your a great writer.But is getting old to .Oh you are a great writer .. since I don't know what to say I'll just say update again soon but as you see I have said that one a lot...How many different ways can you tell some one you like there stories ? hmm I'll figure it out some day..
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: April 19, 2004 07:40 EDT
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You know I love you right? You've been updating so frequently. Thank you so much! *glomps* Here, have a cookie! *gives out Millie's Giant Cookie*
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