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| "Then There Were Two" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: wow
Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 00:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I've read this story many times before, but maybe not always on mediaminer... I will always love it. It's beautifully written. And it's so dark, I really do love it. Great job.
| Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fic before on another account, and I must say that I enjoyed it just as much as I did the first time reading it. Truly fantastic and beautiful.
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: Catherine On: August 10, 2005 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. All of your writing is amazing, but this is by far the most beautiful of your fics. Your writing style has almost a musical quality to it. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that a lot of your fics are inspired by songs...by the way, "Slave" is amazing, please update! i will love you for all of eternity if you do! ::is being driven crazy not knowing what happens next:: --Catherine (www.myspace.com/huzzah)
| Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very nicely written, and when i looked at it i thought it was going to be gross, but it ended up being surreal, and might I say beautiful? Just as you said. This fic was good as promised! It was very good, and very realistic, I thought. Nicely done!
| Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin (never logged in anymore) On: May 04, 2004 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so sad. And yet... it was so poetically written that it was beautiful. Like ikibana. Marron had a beautiful death of sorts. Such life now extinguished. From the title, I thought that Vegeta and Marron would be the last two and then he would be the only one. But this is... more evil. ;) *blinks* I hope Vegeta was the ONLY witness to their shared passion. Somethings a mother just should NOT see-- especially when that mother has homicidal tendencies. I picked up on the screaming and the gunshot that they ignored. So... after the funeral everyone panicked, someone was either shot or killed themself to end it quickly, and others just died. Creepy. That could be another fic too. *lol* I see the next story, too. "And then there was one." Possibly a battle between them or something. (I could SO see that) Or, for some reason, Eighteen and Vegeta hook up. (That is even MORE OOC) And the last would be "And then there were none." By the way, "And Then There Were None" is a murder mystery written by Agatha Christie. *smirk* One of my favorite books because of the evilness factor. There are ten strangers on an island and one by one they die. (Duh) To creep them out, there is a poem called "Ten Little Indians," (the book's alternate title and title for the blackandwhite movie version), which counts down until none remain, all over the house. Most of them die by similar deaths as in the poem. Totally wicked. But knowing my luck, you already knew all that. -_- *clears throat* ANYway. Your one-shot is beautiful and haunting. (Who ISN'T obsessed with having Vegeta?) A beautiful death... with a twist. ^_~
| Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, beautiful, fantastic. I loved how you described the scenery; it fit perfectly with the story. Fall=dying; kinda goes together. Very depressing, but in a beautiful way. A sequel or a prequel would be amazing. I wish I could write it, but I would only bring dis-service to the mesmorizing style that is yours.
| Reviewed By: Love Mokey On: October 16, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fic, and was wondering if you've ever heard of a band called HIM. You used a line in your fanfic from one of his songs.
| Reviewed By: leafless678 On: October 11, 2003 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. Unusual pairing, but I read it all the same, and I'm glad I did. It was very beautiful and moving.
| Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: October 11, 2003 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit this was depressing but great I liked it shit I loved it damnnnnn that was deep poor vege and poor 18 AWWWW I need my kleenex . Later keep the great work girl u rock Nsbvegeta
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