| "The Whole World's Leaning On Me" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vedelle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my characturee but you can use her just dont say that you made her up. Hiei's girl Name: Katana age: 16 Race:full demon, dog demon perferibly or anything eles hair& style: silver with black streaks. at mid waste eye color: blue cateyes with silver out linning height: 5 feet 6 inches personality: quit, doesnt trust many people, loves to fight, after she gets to know you she warms up alittle. from a family that was killed by other demons when she was young. she moved around alot and learned to fight the hard way. she also has asword like inuyashas but it doesnt tansform. she also has a whip of perenrgy that comes out for her hands, like the rose whip,only its blue.
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Title: characters
Reviewed By: Urameshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 21:03 CDT
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a girl you can use is a girl in this one fanfic i writing with the name yuri, she acts really sad when alone and is happy with a small smile on her face when she is with people, is human, and gets angry when other girls are around people she likes
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Reviewed By: Wht?What?Shutuo On: October 23, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is still really good.A 'more Fuedal Era' way huh? How about...(thinking).....someone in one of the villages she visits thinks she's a demon since she smells like death and gets other people to help capture her then they tie her to a wooded post and put straw around her.They set the straw on fire and she she goes up in flames too! If this was modern I'd suggest firecrackers.
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Title: pairing
Reviewed By: LKyra On: October 23, 2003 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reeeaaally want it to be yusuke/kagome!!! I always love odd pairs and it would be awesome!
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Title: Woopie!!
Reviewed By: Fox Warrior Ed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! I like that Hiei pov. I don't know if you meant it to be funny or not but I thought it was. I can't wait for the next update. I'm gonna check everyday...that I can remember. Again-YAY!!!! =^-^=
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Title: Raquel
Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, i loved it! thank you so much for Yusuke! he is so kawaii! I will e-mail you the information to you instead of including it in a review ok?
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Urameshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 20:13 CDT
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love your fanfic, hope yusuke and kagome stay as a couple. could you email me the rest of the prologe at Mikesquidly@aol.com. also i posted a chapter of my fanfic Caught up in the Momnet if you would like to read.
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Title: Yippiee!!
Reviewed By: Fox Warrior Ed [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! That was cool!! I likeded it.Uhhhh...That's all I got to say.
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, great chapter even if it was short! Kuso means Damn by the way... ok and if you could, could i PLEASE have Yusuke?or even *Inu Yasha*.... Well Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me 6150 On: October 20, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, as u probaly figured it's me Miko_Snow Godess_Me, I was just too lazy to sign in today, but N.E. ways.... That was a good chappy, short but good, update soon. Oh and love the side stories. ^___^
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Reviewed By: Why?What?Shutuo On: October 19, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read a Yus/Kag pairing so this is interesting for me. Hey my friend has a good idea for killing Kikyo. First you tie her up and put her in an acid proof bag. Then you pour flesh eating acid in the bag and shake it up. Then you throw the bag in a volcano and wolla no more Kikyo!
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Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: October 18, 2003 02:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Lani! Thanx for e-mailing me the prologue. When I first started reading the story, I wasn't sure if you had done that on purpose or not o_O. NE way, Inu/Kag is ok, but I sometimes think that alternate pairings are cool. It kinda stirs up the story. Is this going to be a Yusuke/Kagome pairing, or are you trying for a pairing out of left field? (Btw I like Hiei he's the strong, silent, deadly type *sigh* ~_~) G2g TTFN ^_^
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Reviewed By: the little fox On: October 18, 2003 01:18 CDT
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okay, im a little confused you say that kurama is dressed in white, does that mean he's in his real form or just wearing white? cause ya weren't real clear on that oh well, good story i liked it alot. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the Inu/Kag fluff was cute but I'm glad it's not gonna be an Inu/Kag fic tho! ^.^ And once again, keep up the good work, and update soon soon soon!!!!!! ^______^ Ja Ne
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Title: Whoo!
Reviewed By: Fox Warrior Ed On: October 17, 2003 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story. But I REALLY wanna see the rest of the prologe. I swear-I think I should have people call me Cat or Fox instead of Ed. I'm too curious for my own good.(Even though 'Fox' is in my name up there*points to nickname* ALL My friends call me Ed)ANYWAYS! My e-mail is eshendock@comcast.net(Don't ask) I thank you. *Bows* Keep up the good work, Oh Great writer of...Greatness.
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