"The Whole World's Leaning On Me" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vedelle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 16:22 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: witer more.. write more ..write more...um..please!!!!! yayayyay!!! Hurry up there getting alittle loud in hear..you know those voices in your head. i love your story.. ya me to .. hurry up please!
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 00:32 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love YYH/IY crossovers & yours is no exception! Keep updating it PLEASE! I want to know how the plot unfolds...
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Reviewed By: RinDeRomanus On: October 15, 2003 00:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved this fic. Everyone's grammer and spelling could use a little work, (For instance the speling of Yuusuke, or Yusuke) and I wasn't trying to be mean! Can I have Kurama? Please? Please please please please please please!!!?! Thanks and, you're writing is great.
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Title: Yay!!! Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 23:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is great!!!!Hehehehe. This was a great chapter i love it! Awwww...Kuwabara just had to mess up Yusuke and Kagome's kiss....Darn. Kurama scared the hell out of Kagome!!!Hehehehe. Keep up the good work!!!See Ya!
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Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: October 14, 2003 02:37 CDT Comment/Review: e-mail address recklessoutlawrebel@msn.com Thx in advance ^_~
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Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: October 14, 2003 02:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hi! really love your fic. Enjoy the character dialogues before and after the chaps too, it makes your story more individual. Please e-mail me the prologue, as it was cut short. Will let you know e-mail address G2g TTFN ^_^
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Title: Love is in the air... Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 18:23 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hiei and Kurama!! Hehehehe. Yusuke and kagome, Yusuke and Kagome Love is in the air!!!! Hip-Hip-Hooray!!!*cheers*. Keep up the good work! I love this story!!! Update again soon! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: PRicanBabyGirl04 On: October 13, 2003 17:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really like this fic! its Great! keep going! *puts gun up to your head* u better! hehehehehe...
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 00:13 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: really like this fic cant wait till your next chapter. hope its soon man i love inuyasha and u even used another one of my fav shows keep up the good work!!! later 4now
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Reviewed By: jess_patches On: October 12, 2003 20:29 CDT Comment/Review: love the story and the inner story write more please
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Title: Hehehehe...... Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 20:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hello...Hehehehe you put me in the uh...dialogue fun stuff yay!!!Hehehehe. Keep up the good work. Jealousy is a very common thing for inu...His subconsious is much smarter. *nods head wisely*. I think this wouldb be a better Yusuke/Kagome...Anyway...Keep up the good work!!!Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 19:42 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great chappy...I love Inu's inner self, he's much better than the outer self or whatever!!! Update soon!!!!!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: FiReAzUnA On: October 12, 2003 16:23 CDT Comment/Review: hey this fanfic is good so far can't wait for you to update it
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 00:36 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really love it so far but I guess the first chappy got cut off or somthin, n.e. ways keep up the good work and update soon? Oh and what are the pairings gonna be? :)
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Title: Hello... Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 22:05 CDT Comment/Review: This is great and all!! But the chapter must have gotten cut of or something...Can you update it soon. I think this will be a great story..What is the pairing? UPdate again soon! Ja ne.
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