| "The Whole World's Leaning On Me" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: the little fox On: October 18, 2003 01:18 CDT
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okay, im a little confused you say that kurama is dressed in white, does that mean he's in his real form or just wearing white? cause ya weren't real clear on that oh well, good story i liked it alot. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the Inu/Kag fluff was cute but I'm glad it's not gonna be an Inu/Kag fic tho! ^.^ And once again, keep up the good work, and update soon soon soon!!!!!! ^______^ Ja Ne
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Title: Whoo!
Reviewed By: Fox Warrior Ed On: October 17, 2003 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story. But I REALLY wanna see the rest of the prologe. I swear-I think I should have people call me Cat or Fox instead of Ed. I'm too curious for my own good.(Even though 'Fox' is in my name up there*points to nickname* ALL My friends call me Ed)ANYWAYS! My e-mail is eshendock@comcast.net(Don't ask) I thank you. *Bows* Keep up the good work, Oh Great writer of...Greatness.
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Reviewed By: Vedelle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
witer more.. write more ..write more...um..please!!!!! yayayyay!!! Hurry up there getting alittle loud in hear..you know those voices in your head. i love your story.. ya me to .. hurry up please!
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love YYH/IY crossovers & yours is no exception! Keep updating it PLEASE! I want to know how the plot unfolds...
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Reviewed By: RinDeRomanus On: October 15, 2003 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic. Everyone's grammer and spelling could use a little work, (For instance the speling of Yuusuke, or Yusuke) and I wasn't trying to be mean! Can I have Kurama? Please? Please please please please please please!!!?! Thanks and, you're writing is great.
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Title: Yay!!!
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great!!!!Hehehehe. This was a great chapter i love it! Awwww...Kuwabara just had to mess up Yusuke and Kagome's kiss....Darn. Kurama scared the hell out of Kagome!!!Hehehehe. Keep up the good work!!!See Ya!
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Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: October 14, 2003 02:37 CDT
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e-mail address recklessoutlawrebel@msn.com Thx in advance ^_~
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Reviewed By: Tiger_Blaze On: October 14, 2003 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! really love your fic. Enjoy the character dialogues before and after the chaps too, it makes your story more individual. Please e-mail me the prologue, as it was cut short. Will let you know e-mail address G2g TTFN ^_^
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Title: Love is in the air...
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei and Kurama!! Hehehehe. Yusuke and kagome, Yusuke and Kagome Love is in the air!!!! Hip-Hip-Hooray!!!*cheers*. Keep up the good work! I love this story!!! Update again soon! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: PRicanBabyGirl04 On: October 13, 2003 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! its Great! keep going! *puts gun up to your head* u better! hehehehehe...
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really like this fic cant wait till your next chapter. hope its soon man i love inuyasha and u even used another one of my fav shows keep up the good work!!! later 4now
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Reviewed By: jess_patches On: October 12, 2003 20:29 CDT
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love the story and the inner story write more please
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Title: Hehehehe......
Reviewed By: Sunstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello...Hehehehe you put me in the uh...dialogue fun stuff yay!!!Hehehehe. Keep up the good work. Jealousy is a very common thing for inu...His subconsious is much smarter. *nods head wisely*. I think this wouldb be a better Yusuke/Kagome...Anyway...Keep up the good work!!!Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chappy...I love Inu's inner self, he's much better than the outer self or whatever!!! Update soon!!!!!! ^__^
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