| "Surrounded Yet Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: typo
Reviewed By: silverpatdog2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...speaking of typos, my major problem is that when I get excited about something I am working on I tend to skip entire words. My statement should read: "you remind me of me in so many..." and you do. I've been there more than once, and I have come out on top too.
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Title: Nice Title
Reviewed By: silverpatdog2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2004 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, YAY!! I was mentioned. That in itself is an honor. I am very proud of you. You remind me in so many many ways, and that's why I like Sango so much in this fic. Keep the practice up. I too am a writer, and am motivated to continue with inspirational writers like you. BTW, the minor typos I see are commonplaced and not a major issue. I like the title. It's better than the one I came up with, "Lonely hearts, Crowded Thoughts"
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Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very breathtaking to finally read a story that wasn't just about Kagome and Inuyasha not that its a bad thing, but I think that Sango and Miroku need some love too. This story was very enjoyable and entertaining. Keep up the good work hope to see more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Silvershrike [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I love it. I must admit, I was one of the very very bad people who didn't review. But, I'm reviewing now...right? I really am sorry, the only time I ever get to read mm is at 3 am after I get done with all my college work, and I really don't want to wake my roomie up. (I know, it's a lame execuse, but it's true). I hope that all your writing undertakings go well. anyway, I love your story, is there more to come, or is it over? I would love to read more.
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Reviewed By: jeannie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 09:35 CST
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Hey, you've written an awesome fic, much better than many others that I've read. I completely understand about trying to balance writing and working of any sort. I hope you know that you're doing very well, and I hope that you keep it up, and not let yourself get down b/c ppl are too lazy to review. Good luck in any and all writing endeavors that you undertake! After all, everything is practice, and practice makes perfect!!
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Reviewed By: lala su [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I agree with Omocron, lots of people must be reading, and being a lazy butt to review. I know exactly how you feel T__T when people don't review you don't know whether people like the story or not :( Don't feel bad, we like your story ^__^ But hey, I like yours! Is it over?? Or more to come? It's really good, and I simpathize a lot with the characters :) Keep it up! MirokuxSango stories rock! And yours does too ^__^
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Reviewed By: Omocron On: November 14, 2003 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, and i'm sure plenty of people are reading, just to lazy to write a reveiw. I do that all the time, but I felt that this story desrved a special reveiw! Please continue w. an epilouge or something!
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Reviewed By: silverpatdog2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story flows very well and the characters are similiar to the actual ones. That is very important to me. I also am in love with the story line. I like those two together. I need to read more...please.
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha On: November 11, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...*blinks*...*blinks again*... um...wow...how can you think no-one would like this?! It's awesome. See above rating?*points* I don't rate for no reason...this is an awesome piece, very VERY original. I love Miroku/Sango, and I like the idea that she has a weaker side as well. Everyone's pretty in-character. Honestly...the only thing I would maybe change is the name. The name itself is a teaser to get a reader interested. If you give away too much, or tell too little, a person could pass it by. That's the only thing. Just a couple ideas for other titles... *Weakness *Surrounded and Alone *Light of Darkness You don't have to take my suggestion, because that's all it is. And I have to say it again. I LOVE this fic!
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Reviewed By: jeannie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 12:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good!! I love it!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: gumi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
miroku! just tell sango that you LOVE her! other than that love the fic. update soon
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