| "I-Shin-Po or Keade's Sex Manual" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 20:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is interesting are you going 2 write more of is it finished???
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: June 14, 2004 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that you have got to be one of the best writers out there. This story is very interesting, even though Half the stuff I didn't really understand.
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Title: Hey yo,
Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How are you? Yea well, aren't you going to finish your fic? I understand that it takes a while to update, but how long can it take? I thought it was kinda confusing. Hmm. Inu Yasha seems deeper... until you get him alone ^_^
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: December 05, 2003 21:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello are you out there? Are you going to upate anytime soon? It has been way to long.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*shakes head* Yes, this seems to hold 'truth' of some kind. I see the POV of why in Japanese history they would believe this to be true. Growing up to be taught these methods one would think they were the way, but I was not so I can't see sex being the reason women outlive men. Though this is very convincing, your work earns another gold star. ^_^
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Reviewed By: :-) On: October 19, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story so far, i read the spring festival one, and im pretty surprised that you research all this! thats cool, cuz normaly people just write and you actually have facts in it...well please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Fairlight On: October 19, 2003 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You are really fantastic at writing and I read all the time. [currently majoring in Lit. and yes I know all I can do with it is teach :) ] The story is great. It is truely original. The girls reactions were about what I thought they would be, you said you wanted female POV. Please keep writing …hope to read from ya soon. (btw…are your readings a hobby or do you have a degree in it? I only ask because your writing is so prolific.) -Fairlight-
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's what I was wandering about. When Inuyasha's ears kept twitching I was wandering if was because the girl's were listening or just random people passing by. Hhmmm. As for your question, as a girl hearing something like boy's talking about sex or sex manual's wouldn't be a big deal to me. (Just so you know I have two brother's and a sex joke telling dad. I am my father's female replica, my brother's don't touch me in that area.) When I think about it in the way the girl's were listening in obiviously it didn't bother them to the point of embaressment. I'd say Kagome's reaction would be like 'Inuyasha's reading that scroll I wonder what he think's of it?' and Sango would be kinda like that, but with some contempt for the 'preverted monk'. Wonderful story as always. I gotta finish that story. The speed in which you write is humiliating me. Look it's moved up to 3! Yeah!
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